Cake

Cake

A Poem by Judy Ponceby
"

What's to say, it's cake :)

"

Lovely chocolate icing,
in sensuous swirls.

Covering velvety,
tantalizing heaven.

Smelling of that warm,
soulful chocolate.

Slightly warm
and still gooey.

Served up with
a cold crisp glass of milk.  

Mmmmmmm. :)

© 2011 Judy Ponceby


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makin me hungry.Let them eat cake!

Posted 12 Years Ago


As I recall, back in the day, "cake" was code for LSD--although I don't remember it coming in chocolate. Actually, I don't remember much of anything of those times. Sorry about the nearly pointless digressive moment.
I'm thinking it's a good thing you finished up with a cold glass of milk--seems like you were getting almost amorous about a common baked good.
OK, I'll try to focus. I have never read a better poem about cake--and I mean that sincerely. (Not gonna state the obvious; not gonna.)
As a matter of fact, right now I'm receiving emails from chocolate cakes all over the country. Most of them contain just three words, "Thank you, Judy!"

Posted 12 Years Ago


very edible...very descriptive...good choice of words to convey the images...well chosen wording..

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very charming and somehow seductive. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


WOW! and i'm still on coffee and cigarettes! beautiful and teasingly written, judy. i bet ur one helluva cook and baker :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I'll be right over! Fun poetry, I like it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


mmm~ word foodies' literary heaven~ metaphorically edible!~ =D~

Posted 12 Years Ago


Evocative of the smells and tastes and textures! Wonderful job Judy!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I'm just sayin...someone might want the cake and eat it too.. ;) xx hahaha.. I love it Judy..fun and rich and well a little tantalizing:) xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


Cake :)
I like cake.
Nice poem! It makes me hungry.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on March 7, 2011
Last Updated on August 15, 2011
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Judy Ponceby
Judy Ponceby

Swanton, OH



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