So Shy....

Being the shy girl with 4 brothers......

ripping, roaring, dad's asnoring.

mom continues, still imploring.
seeking silence, blessed silence.
kids are screaming, eyes agleaming.

flipping, gripping, cats are nipping.
swimming, dipping, fish afinning.
seeking silence, blessed silence.
motors rumbling, brothers grumbling.

quiet, silent, in a corner sitting.
reading, hiding, hope for disappearing.
seeking silence, blessed silence.
whispers spoken, words unbroken.

too shy for noise, unlike those boys
afraid to speak, not a squeak
seeking silence, blessed silence.
......................................................

QUIETTTT!!!!!!, please!

Reviews

[Bridgid Persephone Newm..]

That's cute!I can see a little girl with a black pageboy haircut doing the stealth kitty cat thing!

[LA Lorena]

a very clever write Judy! I enjoyed this.

[FJ Davis]

Conceived in humor; lyrically constructed; well done.
Clever fun!

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, oops sorry, I'll be silent ; )

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Judy! Oh Judy! This is one of the most delightful pieces I have ever read..I love it!
I found myself reading it faster and faster and laughing.......

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

what a delightful poem~ there is such a charming quality to the rhythmic delivery~much enjoyed!~

[Jeremy Wyatt]

ok............shhhhhhhhh (psst lovely poem...I go now judy...tippy toe..)