So Shy....

So Shy....

A Poem by Judy Ponceby
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Being the shy girl with 4 brothers......

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ripping, roaring, dad's asnoring.
mom continues, still imploring.
seeking silence, blessed silence.
kids are screaming, eyes agleaming.

flipping, gripping, cats are nipping.
swimming, dipping, fish afinning.
seeking silence, blessed silence.
motors rumbling, brothers grumbling.

quiet, silent, in a corner sitting.
reading, hiding, hope for disappearing.
seeking silence, blessed silence.
whispers spoken, words unbroken.

too shy for noise, unlike those boys
afraid to speak, not a squeak
seeking silence, blessed silence.
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QUIETTTT!!!!!!, please!

© 2011 Judy Ponceby


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That's cute!I can see a little girl with a black pageboy haircut doing the stealth kitty cat thing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


a very clever write Judy! I enjoyed this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Conceived in humor; lyrically constructed; well done.
Clever fun!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, oops sorry, I'll be silent ; )

Posted 10 Years Ago


Judy! Oh Judy! This is one of the most delightful pieces I have ever read..I love it!
I found myself reading it faster and faster and laughing.......

Posted 10 Years Ago


what a delightful poem~ there is such a charming quality to the rhythmic delivery~much enjoyed!~

Posted 10 Years Ago


ok............shhhhhhhhh (psst lovely poem...I go now judy...tippy toe..)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Judy Ponceby
Judy Ponceby

Swanton, OH



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