In the Clouds...

In the Clouds...

A Poem by Judy Ponceby
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I see .........

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Aloft in my helium balloon
I watch the cloud formation.
White puffs of water vapor
Play scenes of battle simulation.

Of great dragon wars
and vast rebel forces
Colliding with hell spawn
and gladiators with horses.

Soldiers impaled on billowing swords,
Dragons in full embattled flight,
Brash vivid images up in the heavens
Lead to victorious imaginings this night.

© 2011 Judy Ponceby


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Judy Ponceby
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Rebel. Simulation. Aloft. Impaled. Brash.

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Slight, emotional, relevant, sly, true

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Posted 8 Years Ago


Beautiful!

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Posted 8 Years Ago


I'm glad someone sees something in the sky besides fluffy bunnies... well.. not that I don't like bunnies... lol.. but it's very imaginative and creative... i love it!

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Posted 8 Years Ago


"Soldiers impaled on billowing swords"
Very nice. Excellent imagery.

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Posted 9 Years Ago


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So many pictures pop into my mind. I really like the use of language which is very useful in poems. I enjoyed every minute of it. Thankyou

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Posted 9 Years Ago


This is just beautiful and fun...I love the images that come to mind with it.. xx

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Posted 9 Years Ago


An intricate tapestry woven by one poet's magical mind.
Dream on, Judy.

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Posted 9 Years Ago


How soon the smallest gain fills our table with the choicest fruit. The fruit of your imagination is divine. Lovely piece Judy!

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Posted 9 Years Ago


an excellent poem, judy. i love the images u've created here. a few billowy clouds and sweet imagination create images unlimitied. love it :)

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Posted 9 Years Ago


Love the visual effect of this poem ; )

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Judy Ponceby

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