The Win

The Win

A Poem by Judy Ponceby
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My son's favorite topic.

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Two lines of helmeted lineman,
And there's a guy named Ken.

He's got his hands on the ball
Then he yelled his call.

Looking left and right, he calls out "Hike!"
He throws the ball to Mike.

Mike's on the run with ball in hand,
Then he got canned.

Jimmy grabbed him and threw him down
Then he lost the ball and Brendan found

In the rough and tumble with the ball
In a big old crazy brawl,

He had come out of the pile with a fumble
He had a hard tumble.

But he leaped to his feet
He took off away from the fleet.

Running for the endzone
He scores and wins the game!

He owned!

© 2011 Judy Ponceby


Author's Note

Judy Ponceby
My 12 year old son Ian and I alternated writing lines for this. I enjoyed working with him on his favorite subject of football and enjoyed him working with me on my favorite past time.

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This is the kind of thing kids remember--parents, too.
Well done, dear lady.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Great piece! Your always able to capture those little moments in life that we all remember forever. Those things that are fun, light hearted, and are the only things that truely matter.

Posted 8 Years Ago


That's cute :D
Pretty awesome kid you got there :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


A plain and simple prose that speaks to many a person, the mus rarely invokes the power to challenge, but you have given the world a happy, positive way of looking at the world of sports, I truly like it, well done, good read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Yay! Sports! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love it Judy..fun and happy.. :) x

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Judy Ponceby
Judy Ponceby

Swanton, OH



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