A Bit of the Ridiculous

All brain cells are not firing equally this morning... :)

A flurry of furry freaks

Rambunctiously ransacked

Garish Gary's garage.

And for the trouble they caused,

Garish Gary garotted

them, one and all.

Author's Note

Well, you probably can't call it poetry, but it was fun anyway LOL. :)
And very warm thank yous for the help in editing, Sir Frank :)

Reviews

[Elephants & Coyotes]

Fun wordplay.
=)

[Green]

Ha! I'll get thrown out of the library for laughing out of the blue like that! I enjoyed it.

[...]

Ha ha!
The alliteration is magical.

[Rene Velez]

whimsical and imaginative...fun read

[Audrey Howitt]

I laughed out loud Judy! Great fun and very clever! Congrats!

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Rats,? Raccoons? Great fast pace to this piece.
Fun poem. I liked it!

[FJ Davis]

If this isn't poetry, what the hell could you possibly call what I write?
This is delightful stuff! (Garish Gary seems to have a strong sense of justice--unlike certain mush-headed Florida jurors.)
Enjoyed this very much.
(By the way, silliness is almost always ridiculous; brain surgery, on the other hand, is not. Therefore, you have two choices:
1.) Drop the word "Ridiculous."
2.) Replace "Silliness" with "Brain Surgery."
I trust you'll know what to do.
Actually, there is another choice: Drop the first "Ridiculous" and replace "Silliness" with "the Ridiculous."
And still another occurs to me: Tell me to mind my own freakin' business!)

[Chris]

...with catnip garlands
and a child's soft arms.

G' morning still... Hi Judy.
Pardon my continuation... couldn't resist