Aloft

Aloft

A Poem by Judy Ponceby
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For Creative Poetry's Extra Challenge

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Wisps of arctic

essence circulate in

the atmosphere of being.


Translucent whims

waft among the humid

rushes of desire.


And tremble at

the musical notes

of fulfillment.

© 2011 Judy Ponceby


Author's Note

Judy Ponceby
7.23.11 Extra Challenge Words: Atmosphere. Circulate. Translucent. Waft. Arctic. Humid. Musical. Wisp.

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Musical notes of fulfillment is a great line. It makes this piece loving and visual.

Posted 12 Years Ago


'humid rushes of desire'.
Now that is a delicious line!
I enjoy these poems you create out of challenge words.
Great writing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


You used all 8 words in a 27 word poem--that is impressive! And it also has a profound feel to it..beautifully written, Judy. You rock at these lol.

Posted 12 Years Ago


A lovely piece. Great work!

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Posted 12 Years Ago


(Personally, I'd rather my whims be opaque.)
"Aloft" is a creative challenge well-met. This piece was geared to soar.
There are few, Judy, who are your equal at such exercises.


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Posted 12 Years Ago


Never knowing what I might read with you! You show a diversity lacked by some here, well done my friend.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


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beautiful
and so surreal

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Judy Ponceby

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