whispered

"C'mere."

         a whisper fell from pink soft lips

                   as she gazed hungrily at her heart's desire....

Reviews

[crazysox]

What I like best about this poem is that it leaves so much unanswered. Who is she? Who is she talking to? How will they respond? I like poems/stories that let the reader's imagination wander. Keep up the creativity!

[An owl on the moon]

What a perfect moment in time, just filled with loving and longing. It is a glimpse that is tender yet filled with sensuality..

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Love what you mastered in such few words!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Stunning, I like this.

[Ben Taylor]

Lol!!! Frank's comment on this made me laugh so much. :D
And yes, without the "warning" on the poem, I would have assumed it completely innocent..actually, without reading Frank's comment, I would have still been confused as to why you didn't label it as completely innocent. lol.
Big Boy lol.
Oh my. lol. lol.

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Ha ha!
You are a truly gifted wordsmith!

[FJ Davis]

If you hadn't placed a warning on your tiny poem, I would not have known what "pink soft lips" were "speaking."
Now, as you well know, I'd find this even hotter if you'd said, "C'mere Big Boy." ( I do so love when women call me "Big Boy.") Granted, it does ring forties.
Must admit, though, "gazed hungrily at her heart's desire" is enough to inflate a rubber raft.
Great dirty stuff, Laura.