Aflame

For Creative Poetry Extra Challenge

Searing flames ignite a volcanic

     inferno of need.

Sanguine licks of fire

     consume tempermental flesh.

Fierce, sizzling desire bows

     to wanton pleasure.

Author's Note

7.23.11 Words given: Flames. Ignite. Inferno. Sizzling. Fierce. Sanguine. Volcanic. Tempermental. Searing. Consuming.

Reviews

[LadyCardiac]

I loved the way you managed to emphasis passion and desire yet you kept it simplistically unique. And yet at the same time it has this edgy sexyness to it. I'm sorry, I'm still sort of bad at giving reviews but knoq that this was definitely nice.

[FJ Davis]

Very smart and creative.
Gotta get me some o' that "wanton pleasure." What is wanton pleasure anyway?--sounds like a Chinese dessert.

[Poetic Beauty]

this is sensual in a few short lines. You bring passion and fire into this piece without over kill. Great write.

[lawrence bear]

the words flow from your heart naturally, nice piece.

[Tasha]

I liked this a lot, you used the words wonderfully.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Awesome use of the words!

[fargone]

wonderful, judy! and a change of pace for u, i think. i like "tempremental flesh". great phrase :)

[Ben Taylor]

Nicely done. I'm always left with a tangible emotion after reading your Creative Poetry pieces. They all have a very distinct feel to them--this one is angry and passionate. I really do like all the things you write for Creative Poetry :) they are so wonderfully inventive :)

[Lily Mae]

HOT!!! :) Love how you used all this together..it makes it extremely hot to read ..x

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absolutely brilliant word usage!
you are the queen of brevity
this IS intense writing