A Bit of Love

Eyes of brown

Heart of gold

Sending love

I've been told.

Across the waves

between the vibes.

Written on paper 

by the scribes.

Affairs of love in

history gone by.

Lover's seduced

by blink of eye.

Romeo and Juliet.

Cleopatra's Antony.

Guinevere and Lancelot.

And no less, you and me.

Loved and lusted

Sweet as wine.

Stories told 

throughout time.

Love goes on

and on my dear.

Open your heart,

put away fear.

For love's soft vision

may well come.

When unsuspected,

your heart will thrum. 

Reviews

[Aristede Craig Jr]

i love this true poetic beauty wonderous

[Fabian G. Franklin]

" I have heard the mermaids singing, each to each. I do not think that they will sing for me." T.S. Eliot

I know..."I should've been a pair of ragged claws scuttling cross the floor of silent seas" old crab that I am! (laughing) But this vision of yours is sweet and lovely nonetheless.

[Seshat Nidaba]

This could stand side by side any great poetry. The message to me is almost mystical.

[Kid Kirby]

Very well put together and rythmic. Good for the romantic soul in all of us!

[Tate Morgan]

The rhyming beauty is astounding simple and divine

[Samuel Dickens]

So soothingly romantic in an old-fashioned kind of way. Very nice, and no less than I'd expect from the very talented Judy.

[FJ Davis]

Hard not to like this piece, Judy--and you know I always try.
A nice mixture of truth and humor; ending with two stanzas of all lovey-dovey.
Despite the mushy stuff, I still very much enjoyed your poem.

[Jvl narasimharao]

Love is the essence of life.Your heart is full of love.Your poem speaks for you.
yoursJVL

[LadyCardiac]

Affairs of love in
history gone by.
Lover's seduced
by blink of eye.

I think you may very well be one of my favorite poets

[...]

. bright, radiant and hopeful ... my favourite stanza is :

Loved and lusted
Sweet as wine.
Stories told
throughout time.