A Bit of Love

A Bit of Love

A Poem by Judy Ponceby

Eyes of brown
Heart of gold
Sending love
I've been told.

Across the waves
between the vibes.
Written on paper 
by the scribes.

Affairs of love in
history gone by.
Lover's seduced
by blink of eye.

Romeo and Juliet.
Cleopatra's Antony.
Guinevere and Lancelot.
And no less, you and me.

Loved and lusted
Sweet as wine.
Stories told 
throughout time.

Love goes on
and on my dear.
Open your heart,
put away fear.

For love's soft vision
may well come.
When unsuspected,
your heart will thrum. 

© 2011 Judy Ponceby


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i love this true poetic beauty wonderous

Posted 8 Years Ago


" I have heard the mermaids singing, each to each. I do not think that they will sing for me." T.S. Eliot

I know..."I should've been a pair of ragged claws scuttling cross the floor of silent seas" old crab that I am! (laughing) But this vision of yours is sweet and lovely nonetheless.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This could stand side by side any great poetry. The message to me is almost mystical.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very well put together and rythmic. Good for the romantic soul in all of us!

Posted 8 Years Ago


The rhyming beauty is astounding simple and divine

Posted 8 Years Ago


So soothingly romantic in an old-fashioned kind of way. Very nice, and no less than I'd expect from the very talented Judy.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Hard not to like this piece, Judy--and you know I always try.
A nice mixture of truth and humor; ending with two stanzas of all lovey-dovey.
Despite the mushy stuff, I still very much enjoyed your poem.

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Posted 8 Years Ago


Love is the essence of life.Your heart is full of love.Your poem speaks for you.
yoursJVL

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Posted 8 Years Ago


Affairs of love in
history gone by.
Lover's seduced
by blink of eye.

I think you may very well be one of my favorite poets

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 8 Years Ago


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...
. bright, radiant and hopeful ... my favourite stanza is :

Loved and lusted
Sweet as wine.
Stories told
throughout time.

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Posted 8 Years Ago



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Judy Ponceby

Swanton, OH



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