Manual Whispers

Manual Whispers

A Poem by Judy Ponceby
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Titled by Frank James Davis, an inspiring sort of fella :)

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She felt his hands stroke her heaving flanks
Sensitive fingers brushing the dampness.

She leaned into the hands of this man,
Her friend and master for the moment.

Then she whinnied loudly and galloped,
To strut among the jealous herd.

© 2011 Judy Ponceby


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Judy Ponceby
Despite Frank's opinion, this is becoming a grand collaboration :)

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Double entendre awesomeness.

Posted 8 Years Ago


The first line lit up a beautiful image in my mind. And I love the analogy this piece presents.

Posted 8 Years Ago


i love that this is simple and straight forward and yet it still gives the reader enough descriptive language to form an image of what you are writing about!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nice to be associated--even in a small way--with such high-quality work.
I've told you before, Judy, you are blissfully unaware of your own great potential. It is comforting for me to know that, despite you opinion or mine, that talent will manifest.
Just look.

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Posted 8 Years Ago


wonderful Judy, great descriptive language

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Posted 8 Years Ago


A interesting poem. I like the way you create the desire and the pleasure. Then galloped away with the herd. This poem made my old mind think this morning. A excellent poem.
Coyote

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