Manual Whispers

Titled by Frank James Davis, an inspiring sort of fella :)

She felt his hands stroke her heaving flanks

Sensitive fingers brushing the dampness.

She leaned into the hands of this man,

Her friend and master for the moment.

Then she whinnied loudly and galloped,

Off to be with the rest of the herd.

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

Double entendre awesomeness.

[Fire&Ice]

The first line lit up a beautiful image in my mind. And I love the analogy this piece presents.

[blakjassy]

i love that this is simple and straight forward and yet it still gives the reader enough descriptive language to form an image of what you are writing about!

[FJ Davis]

Nice to be associated--even in a small way--with such high-quality work.
I've told you before, Judy, you are blissfully unaware of your own great potential. It is comforting for me to know that, despite you opinion or mine, that talent will manifest.
Just look.

[Richielee]

wonderful Judy, great descriptive language

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem. I like the way you create the desire and the pleasure. Then galloped away with the herd. This poem made my old mind think this morning. A excellent poem.
Coyote