From the ether...

From the ether...

A Poem by Judy Ponceby
"

the mysterious woven webs of waking dreams...

"
the 
mysterious 
web of waking 
dreams

woven 

in mid air 
above 
a vast abyss

lead 
eternally 

into 
the unknown

following 

single 

strand 
of 
being

© 2011 Judy Ponceby


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My Dear Writing Friend Judy,
Wow, in only twenty-five words you set my mind to musing all day, a job well done. Simple, deep, and dusted with wisdom. You again my friend have painted a word picture that gave my senses a jolt, much like being struck by lighting while standing in a pond.
I am sorry it took me so long to post my musing but I have been away in the Bush.

Blessings, Laughing-Bear


Posted 12 Years Ago


This made me think of a dreamcatcher! Your words dangle in mid air as if to catch the hopes and dreams of the reader. Splendid!

Posted 12 Years Ago


wonderfully stated...loved it....

Posted 12 Years Ago


So well stated Judy! And full of the wisdom of dreams. Loved it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


There may well be an "ether."
Better than any scientist's conjecture, is your gorgeous and purely elegant description--indeed, definition--of this supposedly rarefied element.
Lovely, light-bearing, lingering poetry--as accurate and far more palatable than unpronounceable technical terms or endless, impossible-to-comprehend mathematics.
Congratulations, Judy, you are a virtual genius!

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Interesting. It made me think :)

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Posted 12 Years Ago


brilliant Judy,deep and one to think about : ))

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Judy, that is a mellow thought!

Chris

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Is there a pot of gold at the end of the weave? ;) I love the dreaming while awake:) xx

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Posted 12 Years Ago


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Judy Ponceby

Swanton, OH



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