Seeking

Seeking

A Poem by Judy Ponceby
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For Creative Poetry

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I wander the catacombs
weary and alone.

In the infernal heat
I perspire.

A journey perpetuated 
by an uncanny ability 
to feel the 
estuary
of 
superstition 
and 
supernatural.

Lead to 
the deeper mystery
of
reality versus perception,

where 

we question

Truth.

© 2011 Judy Ponceby


Author's Note

Judy Ponceby
10.8.11 Words: Catacombs. Uncanny. Superstitious. Estuary. Perspire. Journey.

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You did very well with the words. The poem was strong and flow of the story in the words open up some good visions. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


You did a very good job using the words. Great write.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love this poem. You have used the word quite well. This takes me on a journey through the mind of perception. I love the images.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I see this word bank would be a challenge to do as well, you did very well with it and I love the part about perception being reality.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Pilate once asked that question when truth stood before him. Some miss the forest for the trees. But even Pilate was wise enough to declare he found no fault. The reality is that solid matter is not solid. Ask any molecular physicist and he will gladly prove it to you. But you still believe it IS solid...Your perception IS your reality...to YOU. Interesting write.

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Posted 8 Years Ago


Well done ..

Jazzy :)

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Posted 8 Years Ago



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