A Rose

A Rose

A Poem by Judy Ponceby
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For Creative Poetry.

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Close your eyes.
Immerse yourself
in 
the sensuous treasure
of 
a rose.
Sweet scented
seduction.
Soft, fragile petal
grazing your cheek.
Find yourself 
enamored
of cool dew
that slipped
the trenches 
of a nimbus cloud and
settled on this 
speck of 
earth-bound beauty
inspiring 
procreative 
urges.

© 2011 Judy Ponceby


Author's Note

Judy Ponceby
Words 10/3: Trenches. Immerse. Nimbus. Speck. Procreative. Enamored. Treasure. Rose. Petal.

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such a delicate most lovely piece of poetry. Quite enjoyed the write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


actually two prose offerings.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like roses, but you have to be careful of those nasty old thorns. You have a wonderfully expressive style.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is detailed and gorgeous.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Not like any other.

Posted 12 Years Ago


brevity at its best

Posted 12 Years Ago


I had to inspect this particular write of yours, Judy, because my mom, Susie Q, shelved it in her library. I loved the sensuous nature of the dew-kissed rose that you spoke of. Quite different from your normal writes, but very seductive. You never cease to amaze me! I hope you have went back to read my tribute to you; you continue to receive reviews!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


A lovely tribute to the rose. It is the flower for June,the month I was born. The rose always brings special memories of the red roses my Dad gave to my Mom on their anniversary signifying his love for her. Thank you for sharing your words.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love the Sensuous Treasure of a Rose, quite fitting, Each bloom brings forth a new bounty of visual delights!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very good usage of the words and profound

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on October 8, 2011
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