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Cometry

A Poem by Judy Ponceby


I discovered a star

shiny and bright.

It burned from within
with glorious light.

I watched as it flared 
bright orange then red.
It burst from my hand 
and as it fled,

It sparkled and shone, 
flying away with a trail
That left me in wonder 
as I watched it set sail.

On beyond Saturn 
and way past Pluto,
seeking its fortune 
it continued to flow.

Silently sailing vast 
light years away
Inspiring adventure 
in every way.

© 2011 Judy Ponceby


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Simply like us we go forth in a shard of sparks to try our wings How grand it is to watch our own children step out on their own and fly.I remember when My own daughter left home i wore a strong face but i couldnt hide the tear on my cheek for her

Posted 7 Years Ago


love this
you paint a vivid picture!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Halley would be proud of this.

Posted 7 Years Ago


The Sunset
The Sunset
I want to share with you!
My writing is very interesting! Please read it! I write poems and short stories!
I like the places you took me with your poem. Sometime a night sky or a sun rising in the sky can awake dreams and hope. Thank you for a outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nice imagery of the celestial type. The heavens give us so much inspiration.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on December 3, 2011
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Judy Ponceby
Judy Ponceby

Swanton, OH



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