echoes

echoes

A Poem by Judy Ponceby
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For Creative Poetry.

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Tabla beat
hear the rhythm.

Triumphant
rise unto heav'n.

Abandon all
the nano-cares.

Freedom sought
found and shared.


© 2012 Judy Ponceby


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Judy Ponceby
New Words: freedom, abandon, nano, tabla, triumphant

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very nice

Posted 7 Years Ago


very nice little poem. the rhythm ans vocab are both effective. Lights up the sky like a comet, and, then, it's gone again, leaving that childish longing that it didn't end so quickly. Lovely read.

Cheers!

Posted 7 Years Ago


A criss-cross trip of awesome across interesting vocabulary choices. Love the last lines the best.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Love the "Abandon all/the nano cares." Very creative:) Nice rhythm to this short piece.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wow. In this short poem. Used all the words. I like the strength and desire of the poem also. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Judy Ponceby
Judy Ponceby

Swanton, OH



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