Lighting the Heavens

luminous hued
sparkles
blink brightly
in the velvet night
gazing upon enamored
lovers
unaware of their
brilliance

enthralled
they see
only
the eternal
glow
of
desire
just as brilliant
and burning
as the brightest
suns

in the heavens

Reviews

[Michael G. Smith]

I hope they're married, lo,.

[Adam Whitworth]

nice one :)

[emmajoy]

Beautiful, truly, like drips of glistening water falling down a page.

'.. as brilliant ~ and burning ~ as the brightest ~ suns ~ in the heavens '

[J Todd Underhill]

A Read as beautiful as a waterfall, this one keep the eyes moving down the page.