Dancing with Daisies

Dancing with Daisies

A Poem by MsJewel
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love poem

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art ~ Obrasky

 

When the last summer song begins to fade

a lonely melody through once pastel adorned skies

and the breeze holds the memory of a softer time

 

whispering through a dream of daisies

 

steal through the dimming light my love

and find me

             petals unruffled

laughing with the birds and butterflies

                     still dancing

                           because you love me

© 2013 MsJewel


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most think of daisies they think of the old "she loves me, she loves me not.." of petals telling the joy or pain of love... but Julie, I like this version much better... of "unruffled petals" of "laughing with the birds and butterflies
still dancing
because you love me"...
have you ever walked and came upon a field of daisies??? wild flowers, everywhere and then couldn't resist the urge to just stop in the middle of them and lay down looking up at a cloudless blue sky. your poem took me back to that day... Thanks Julie, for the poem , but also for the memory.. ~~redezone




Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Years Ago

I spent most of my summer's growing up at my grandparents farm in the midwest. There were fields of.. read more



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'Dancing with Daisies'
MsJewel,
'Just the thing' it is to know someone out in the world loves us. This can sometimes be the deciding factor to get a person over ruts of this life. I like the use of words like, "and the breeze holds the memory of a softer time." That is what I think of with summer. It is gentle, not brittle, harsh. Yes love brings us to a place of "Still dancing....because you love me." Thanks for the reminder to be thankful for such a blessing.
Kathy

Posted 2 Years Ago


It's nice to see summer is all year round in this delightful love poem !

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Years Ago

Thank you Tom. I'm definitely a summer girl...not looking forward to winter. :) Julie
Those warm hearts keep us alive.. no matter the weather ..

Soft and sweet .. Nice Image too !

Jazz

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment! :) Julie
J. J.  Nightingale

8 Years Ago

:)........................... YRW
sweet and gentle and light - all the things a poem should be. Daisies are such effervescent flowers, just like this poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Years Ago

Thanks again! :) Julie
Isn't love a wonderful muse? your writing exemplifies your passion. Very nice. Trace

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Years Ago

Thanks again sweetie. :)
Awww I loved this so much!! thank you for sharing your talent!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Years Ago

Thanks again for your wonderful comments. :) Julie
So very soft and pretty, Julie. I could picture a woman laughing while twirling in a field of daisies. So emotive! A super love poem. Lydi**

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Years Ago

Thank you for always supporting my poetry Lydi. I appreciate you! :) Julie
Ahh Julie, another soft and tender poem. Your words are like a salve to the mind and soul. A poem filled with the glory of being loved.
Your imagery is truly stunning, your last four lines breathtaking.
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Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Years Ago

Thanks so much! :) Julie
Lovely stuff, reminds me of hippies a very nostalgic piece in my mind. I also really like the piece you attached :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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MsJewel

8 Years Ago

Perhaps I'm a bit of a hippy at heart! Thanks so much for your comment. :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart. I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's. I enjoy rec.. more..

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