You have an innate style that pulls me into the sentiments of your write.. and this eloquent piece has truly whispered good bye to summer... I felt the sadness...
I love fall, but I'm a summer child...so I can relate to this emotion...
Well penned...elegant write!~xoxo~
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Thank you my sweet friend from one summer girl to another! :) Julie
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It's my pleasure, Julie... I can see your summer smile... Beautiful! :)
I like the poem. Had a light and beautiful feel to the words. It felt like a kind whisper of things to come and things left behind. I like the use of the kiss. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Julie, We all hate to lose those summer days the warm embrace it gives us, but fall can be just as enchanting. Nice work.
Will
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We don't have much of a fall here in california - I keep waiting for these darn palm trees to turn c.. read moreWe don't have much of a fall here in california - I keep waiting for these darn palm trees to turn color - I guess I'll always be a summer girl! :) Julie
listening to Evanescense, "Bring Me To Life" (cool song by the way) and as I read, I was thinking that a lazy, sleepy summer kiss, hmmm a wonderful way to segment into Autumn with its colors and seeping chill... its the harbinger of harsh winter nights where hot chocolate in front of a roaring fireplace, wrapped in a warm throw come into view... but I think that even with the wonder and beauty a summer dream, spring kisses are the best.... thanks Julie for the "warm sunbeams"... be well, ~~redzone
Wildflowers, butterflies, cloudless skies and lovely kisses, what could be more awe inspiring that that...I sigh'd throughout the entire write, I nearly passed out, simply gorgeous my sweet friend, gorgeous.
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Thank you Frieda! I appreciate you and your friendship. :) Julie
What a beautiful welcome letter to fall. Your poem breathes beauty upon us all as we wait the arrival of this wonderful season. One last kiss and we bid farewell to summer, preparing to embrace Autumn. Very nicely done Julie.
Sweet and sentimental... Goodbyes are always sad and painful. I can sense those emotions here. I already bid my goodbye to my summer dreams, and yeah, this piece totally explains how I feel. ;) Thanks, Julie.
I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart.
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