The Lightest Touch

"good morning"

photograph compliments of myopera

 

 

~~~

The lightest touch

 awakens the breaking dawn

 

ruffling the curtains of my imagination

opening the windows of my soul

to all that’s new

 

and I am a peach bloom rising

on a pastel breeze through painted skies

dew kissed and dressed in butterfly wings

and sunshine smiles

 

awaken day

awaken me...

 

with poetry

~~~

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and amazing poetry.
"and I am a peach bloom rising
on a pastel breeze through painted skies
dew kissed and dressed in butterfly wings
and sunshine smiles"
The words took me to positive and beautiful thoughts and locations. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Good Morning! Thank you for you wonderful review of my poem! :) Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

To greet the day with poetry.....to rejoice in all that there is to see of nature's beauty....that is the right way to live! "ruffling the curtains of my imagination opening the windows of my soul" Such gorgeous imagery here! A wonderful poem celebrating life. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Thank you Lydi. Have a lovely day my friend. :) Julie

[kublakhan27]

Gorgeous opening lines, and they really set the tone for this gentle, idyllic piece...an inspiring way to start any day...well done Julie :)

[MsJewel]

I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem. Have a beautiful day my friend. :) Julie

[kublakhan27]

Same to you my friend :)

[OTownPete]

Quite a lovely flow to this well crafted description of greeting the morn Ms. Julie. Your friend in words, Pete

[MsJewel]

Thank you Pete! :) Julie

[Jack...]

I may use the word "beautiful" far too often when describing your work my friend, but it always fits so perfectly. Loved this one.

[MsJewel]

You are very kind Jack. Thank you. :) julie

[Keith]

Ah, a good poem to start the day.

[MsJewel]

I'm glad you enjoyed it Keith! Have a beautiful day! :) Julie

[wordwarrior]

Ahh my Julie how utterly gorgeous! Seems I repeat these same words to all your amazing poetry. They always make me sigh. The imagery is soft and delicate. I love it! Third verse is my favourite!

[MsJewel]

Thank you my kind friend. I appreciate you! :) Julie

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Ohh, dreamy descriptions.. The last part:

"awaken day
awaken me...

with poetry"

has a sensual, sincere, soulful touch to it. It makes a good ending. Good job, Julie. :x

[MsJewel]

Thank you. Have a beautiful day! :) Julie

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

and I am a peach bloom rising
on a pastel breeze through painted skies -- now if that isn't just the most delicious image I can imagine!

Beautiful...sensual...tranquil...hopeful; you always manage to make me smile when I read your work. Well done.

[MsJewel]

I'm so glad you enjoyed this Sarah. Have a beautiful day! :) Julie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, to what Sarah said also...i like that.."delicious" good description of this.

[Stevo The POE-t]

Really great job here... I really enjoyed reading it... Keep up the good work, and I can't wait to read what's next from you... Thanks for sharing...

[MsJewel]

Thank you Steve :) Julie

[Melobldnfr]

This has brought on one of those slow-curl-smiles. Like this: :-} Thanks.

[MsJewel]

Thank you! :) Julie