Fly Butterflies

Fly Butterflies

A Poem by MsJewel

 photograph compliments of myopera

 

Reality is a long fall for a butterfly

dressed in daydreams and fantasies

     

          f

            l

              u

                 t

                    t

                      e

                         r

                            i

                              n

                                  g

          

through delicate words and pretty prose

and poetry etched

                    way up high

 in rainbow tinted skies

 

         thankful

your wings are strong enough for two

 

                         fly butterflies

© 2013 MsJewel


Author's Note

MsJewel
Dedicated to three very special friends who helped me through a difficult time. Trace, Lydi and Renee, I appreciate your kindness, love and support more than I could ever put into words...but here's a start. I love you guys!

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A wonderful write, Julie! I loved this one, but then, I almost always love your writes. Lovely words and thoughts seem to flow effortlessly from your pen and create such beautiful images. This one is meaningful to me because we just visited a Butterfly Conservatory, and I was awe-struck by the beauty of those creatures. Bravo!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Years Ago

Thank you Joyce. I hope you're enjoying a beautiful day! :) Julie



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A eloquent and worthy tribute to your three friends, penned with poetic diligence and gratefulness !

Posted 8 Years Ago


Oh this is the sweetest poem and your authors note shows the loving person you are. Its a blessing to have friends who stand with you in hard times. ;-)

Posted 8 Years Ago


MsJewel

8 Years Ago

Thank you! :) Julie
The lay out of the poen is wonderful nicely written.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Years Ago

Thank you Mark! :) Julie
"through delicate words and pretty prose" I like this line! :)

Wow, Julie, that's such a beautiful tribute. And what a metaphor to associate with your friends! I myself love butterflies. They are lovely and fascinating creatures. ;)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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MsJewel

8 Years Ago

I love butterflies too. Thanks so much for reading and leaving a lovely comment. :) Julie
I admire your willingness to tinker with different formats...I've never had the guts to do that, though I wonder if I'd get more readers if I did :P Beautiful sentiments here and a great tribute. Well done Julie :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Years Ago

Thank you. I look at it as art - the prettier the better. I'm thrilled you liked this one. :) Julie
They are all my friends and I am sure that they all harbor deep appreciation for your words Ms. Julie. Your friend in words, Pete

Posted 8 Years Ago


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MsJewel

8 Years Ago

Thank you Pete. Hugs, Julie
I liked this piece a whole lot, the pacing, placement on the page and the alliteration. We don't normally think of butterflies as being strong but now I do. Some fantastic friends you have to inspire such wonderful poetry.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Years Ago

They are fantastic friends Pryde. I owe them a lot. Thank you so much for your kind words. :) Julie
My wings will always have room for a friend like you who needs to hitch a ride, dear Julie. What a warm and wonderful dedication for Trace, Renee, and me. We have all been there for each other...and that makes life so much easier. I am touched, Julie. Thank you. Lydi**

Posted 8 Years Ago


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MsJewel

8 Years Ago

You are welcome my dear friend. I appreciate your support and your friendship more than I can say. H.. read more
this was a really lovely write of yours dear:)
i completely enjoyed everything here... friends, obviously are the major source of lights in our life
they r ever-ready to help us anytime and in any situation...
those really indispensable elements, without whom our life really would be nothing:)

hats off to all three of your friends:) may you always be surrounded by great friends as these:)to help you and brighten you:)

well done

saumya:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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MsJewel

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment. I hope you're enjoying a beautiful day :) Julie
Saumya

8 Years Ago

youre welcm dear:) my pleasure:) n yes am enjoying the day:)
best wishes
saumya:)
I love this...the wings of friends...where would we be without them?

Posted 8 Years Ago


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MsJewel

8 Years Ago

Thanks Jack :) Julie

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MsJewel

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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart. I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's. I enjoy rec.. more..

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