Making Memories

Making Memories

A Poem by MsJewel
"

a simple love poem

"

art ~ Mark Spain

 

 

 

I remember
when the breeze whispered of romance

Blowing softly
over a liquid blanket of diamonds
dancing upon the slow moving water

I shivered
as you pulled my wrap over my shoulders
holding me close against your chest
where the scent of you blended
with the sweet anticipation of your kiss

We laughed
while the diamonds waltzed in perfect rhythm
twirling in tiny pirouettes

Elegant, graceful
and with such an ease...

It was only
when I felt your lips gently touch mine
did I realize

I would be making memories


Yes, I remember
when the breeze whispered of romance
and I fell in love

© 2013 MsJewel


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Julie I must disagree, this is hardly a "simple love poem". The way you make words shine with the gentleness of a sweet kiss, not to mention how your heart reveals itself in the imagery.. well, this is art my friend and as complex and wonderful as life i tself. I am glad to be able to read, thanks. --redzone

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MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Curt, Thank you for your very kind comment. I appreciate you and your friendship :) Julie



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twirling in tiny pirouettes
this line makes me shiver brilliant

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MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thanks again! :) Julie
Julie I must disagree, this is hardly a "simple love poem". The way you make words shine with the gentleness of a sweet kiss, not to mention how your heart reveals itself in the imagery.. well, this is art my friend and as complex and wonderful as life i tself. I am glad to be able to read, thanks. --redzone

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Curt, Thank you for your very kind comment. I appreciate you and your friendship :) Julie
I like the liquid blankets of diamonds line. Memories are all kinds of things. Some good some bad. Romance

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MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you! :) Julie
A nestling kitten like purr... "holding me close against your chest
where the scent of you blended with the sweet anticipation of your kiss"
I was pulled in by " liquid blanket of diamonds" and the lovely finish....
"and I fell in love" as did I~ with your poetry.
Rossen



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MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment. Have a beautiful evening :) Julie
Another beauty, Julie. I love your softly beautiful images - they are entrancing and I savor them. Thank you.

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MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment Joyce. Have a beautiful day Hugs, Julie
Making memories is such a wonderful pass time. I wish I could patent it. Love this elegant little poem. I does whisper with romance and love. Very nicely penned. Trace

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MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you my sweet friend. Hugs, Julie
Beautiful artwork and amazing poetry for love. Love give us reasons to be alive. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

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MsJewel

7 Years Ago

thank you my sweet friend! :) Julie
This one is delicious beautifully written just a real treat to read. Well done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you Mark! :) Julie
It's always a joy reading your work my friend. You have a way of taking the positives from bittersweet memories such as these and defining them in that way. It's a quality I wish I had. Of all the poetic treasures scattered throughout this piece, I love the water image in the second stanza the most. Well done Julie :)

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you for the kind comment and compliment my sweet friend. :) Julie
Julie this is a wonderful write filled with anticipation and romance loved it

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MsJewel

7 Years Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it Ron. Thank you for your wonderful comment. :) Julie

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MsJewel
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