Winter

Winter

A Poem by MsJewel
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a romantic fantasy

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art ~ winter goddess by Charlene maguire

 

 

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Gather cool winds around her

and shake her silken hair

weaving the beams of moonlight

and he shall feel her there

 

Falling in mists and shadows

haunting the darkest night

twirling with grace she whispers

melodies soft and light

 

Filling the sky above him

with pale white innocence

and he can feel her spirit

drifting with elegance

 

Drawing him in the blanket

that sweeps her ivory bed

wrapping his heart in splendor

into her dreams he’s led

 

“Dance my love, just snowflakes

in this white wonderland

Float with me on fantasies

come love, take my hand”

 

Dressing his eyes with beauty

 shimmers of diamond glow

crown her head with lilies

yet in the night below…

 

The roses chill and wither

at her touch, icy cold

If he could make just one wish

If he could be so bold

 

To gather cool winds around her

warm her beauty pale and fair

and drift with her to springtime 

and still....to feel her there

~~~

© 2014 MsJewel


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To gather cool winds around her

warm her beauty pale and fair

and drift with her to springtime

and still....to feel her there

lovely lines. ! hugs !
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Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you Anand. Happy New Year my friend. Hugs, Julie



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This poem draws the picture of an epic romance. The allegory of the winter goddess is a stunning figure that only serves to empower the thoughts you chose to channel through your writing. A beautiful write with an emotional message.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your thoughtful comment. I'm looking forward to reading your poetry :) Julie
I'm truly bedazzled by your words Julie, you have a gift, to make love to winter, and feel the season very well... it's so innocent, and loving how your words just dance in this piece of writing... truly one I will favorite, and will come back for, many times, because, we should need to love every moment...

You always warm your readers heart :) loved it.

- Elisa xo

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you my sweet friend for your wonderful comment and compliment. I am touched by your words. Hav.. read more

10 Years Ago

You're ever so welcome dear! :) love your art!
A perfect poem for the season...I can't help but think of Baby It's Cold Outside when I read this. There is nothing better than cuddling with one's sweetheart on a cold Winter's night. Beautiful work Julie :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


this reminds me of young love...that innocent kind...maybe the first time...the chill of being scared but the warmth of the hot blood of youth melting the snow with passion...

when physical contact really meant something...the hesitation in movement, almost frozen in time...as we were working on those "night moves" as bob seeger wrote..."trying to make some front page, drive-in news"

and it was summertime, in winter.

love the wording in this...
jacob

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob. I appreciate your thoughtful comments. :) Julie
I love it so romantic!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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BubblingMe

10 Years Ago

Huh my name isn't Julie?
MsJewel

10 Years Ago

No my name is Julie, LOL...
BubblingMe

10 Years Ago

Yes now I know that haha I read it to fast ;)
I admire the way you laced some body anatomy with weather and romance all in one..creative, beautiful, resplendent and more!!! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie
A lovely interpretation of winter. Great poem Jewel

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment. :) Julie
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winter can be so beautiful and romantic....at least with you behind a keyboard :) this is a breathtaking poem that just has me dreaming about love

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

You are very kind Mark. Thank you :) Julie
You make beauty come alive even in the winter season and you make fantasy come real any time...Bravo........................

Posted 10 Years Ago


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MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you Sami! :) Julie
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

MY pleasure...Any time...:).................
You make me almost want to fall in love with winter! that is saying something as I love the Spring as everything is coming alive, yet winter is where things are sleeping. This didn't make me want to sleep. It made me want to dance, on snowflakes and fantasies. Nicely written.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your wonderful comment. I love the spring as well, but there is beauty in the winter. .. read more

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MsJewel
MsJewel

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