You...

~ another little love poem ~

 

photograph compliments of pinterest

 

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In a black and white existence

of narrow roads

and straight lines

you have me twirling

in paisley painted days

and red lipstick nights

 

Inspirational…perhaps

 

but one thing is certain

 

You

color my world

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Reviews

[redzone]

wow Julie, paisley painted days and red lipstick nights, simply delicious and colorfully rich in... in.. "sighs", if you don't mind my saying, your poetry colors my (everyones) life... who would want narrow roads or straight lines ever again... not me. thanks Julie for a wonderful start to my day. ~~redzone

[MsJewel]

Thank you for a wonderful start to my day Curt! Happy New Year my friend. :) Julie

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Amazing!!!
So beautiful and romantic!
I loved it!
:)

[MsJewel]

Thanks again :) Julie

[Cassie]

wow!!!!! very lovely romantic poem.

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it Cassie. Thank you :) Julie

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Scrumptiously written! A delight to read!

[MsJewel]

Thank you Gleb! :) Julie

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Julie.. hot and sassy... Where is my saxophone?!!
to make this a celebration in art and poetry. truly... Pat

[MsJewel]

I didn't know you played Pat! Happy New Year my sweet friend. Hugs, Julie

[Patricia Wedel]

Hi Julie... When My son was fifteen (now 43), I
bought a wonderful saxophone at a yard sale
"for a song". The owner said it was his pal all
through college and he played it a lot. I gave it
To my son and he traded it for a drum set...
I have often wished I had kept it. President Clinton
played Sax at the time. The Sax had a lot of dents but
played like a passionate poem! Now I am thinking about
Playing the Drum for a Rock Band. Love and hugs... Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and amazing poetry. Good to have someone to make your world come alive with color and hope. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment. I hope you're enjoying a beautiful day! :) Julie

[Valeriya Nahirnyak]

Well he colors your, he discolored mine :| (jiggles) I'm fine, I just liked it very much !

[MsJewel]

I'm so glad Valerie. Thank you! :) Julie

[Valeriya Nahirnyak]

You're very welcome! (:

[s y e]

OK, it is official. I am in love - I mean in love - with that picture. O-M-G! Like wow.

And then your poem... Julie, I am so super jealous of you write now.

[MsJewel]

I had the same reaction when I found the picture. I knew I had to write something to go with it. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it as well. Hugs, Julie

[Trace]

your poem is as brilliant as the inspiration for the photo. both compliments each other.

very nice,

Trace

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend. You color my world. Hugs, Julie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

zapped me with the hues of this poem...

love can color a black and white world for sure...exuberant colors of feeling here.
nicely expressed...

[MsJewel]

Thank you Jacob! :) Julie

[Trevor Barnett]

A very sweet poem Julie! You've got some real beautiful imagery going on here.

[MsJewel]

Thanks again Trevor. :) Julie