Seabirds, Lullabies and Fantasies

Seabirds, Lullabies and Fantasies

A Poem by MsJewel

art ~ Garmash

 

 

 

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The seabirds have returned

filling the breeze with soft songs

and sweet melodies

 

A lullaby of love

warming the sky and teasing my heart

 

While just beyond reach

beyond the glimmering clouds

 where the ocean meets the sky

you shine…

 

paradise in loves pure light

 

I watch…from a distance

 

as memories like sunbeams

weave a tapestry of strawberry kissed yesterdays

and a sandcastle built for two…

 

“Dance with me, love

like the mist of the tide swept on the breeze

Love changes everything

when you listen to your heart”

 

I smile

 

the seabirds have returned

~~~

© 2014 MsJewel


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Utterly romantic, a lullaby with a bit of strawberry dipped sass...

as memories like sunbeams
weave a tapestry of strawberry kissed yesterdays
and a sandcastle built for two…
Dance with me, love

Sigh....your returning seabirds warm'd my heart, just what I need on this chilly night,
going into my favorites toot sweet...it's blissful Julie :-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment. You're the best! :) Julie
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

You're the best, this is your forte Julie, and I've been waiting on you for forever to read my Rainb.. read more
MsJewel

10 Years Ago

I'm on my way now!


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Another beautiful poem for the one you loved and lost.
you paint such a beautiful picture with your words
and the longing for that lost love is real.
very touching poem.
HUGGS. ...Trace

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you Trace Hugs, Julie
"A lullaby of love warming the sky and teasing my heart" wonderful line, wonderful poem...luv it! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you love it Raymond! :) Julie
When it come to writing very beautiful romantic poetry you have a beautiful talent in expressing your thought and feelings what love mean to you it mean everything to you. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you Larry :) Julie
Sublime and gentle-but-assertive evocations of romance...kind of a mouthful I know, but it's the best way I can think of explaining it haha Of course these are the elements I've come to expect from your writing...words like soft, sweet, and lullaby do just that, lull the reader into a sensuous scene of ecstasy...I mean a good lull obviously :) I can almost hear the waves and the returning seabirds here...lovely work as always Julie :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

You leave the most wonderful comments on my poetry. Thank you! :) Julie
kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Always a pleasure my friend :)
I will never hear the seabirds in the same way again. Very beautiful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you sweet friend :) Julie
Blissful, absolutely blissful, carried my heart and soul to good times and sunshine! x

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you! :) Julie
sand castles for two strawberry kisses from yesterday my fav

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thanks Ron! :) Julie
"as memories like sunbeams
weave a tapestry of strawberry kissed yesterdays
and a sandcastle built for two…"

These lines have touched me .A good life must be filled of wonderful memories to look back on :)


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for you lovely comment :) Julie
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
wow Julie, this is a beautiful poem. very captivating and dreamy, just draw you in and leaves you feeling very lighthearted. I've never quite felt so blissful just from reading a poem, this is just wonderful, you are an extremely talented lady. beautiful :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment. I appreciate you. :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

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