You Are Lovely

 

art ~ "Warmth" by Vidan

 

 

You came to me

            like April

                    slow and sweet

 

The breeze through my curtains

embracing my spirit like some sweet balm

the freshness of which never fades, but rises

like the quickening of senses

that finds me

              where spring and lovers meet

the perfume of passion

catching the light, weightless,

         whirling golden in the sun

with the taste and the voice of love…

whispering words,

               poetic words,

                        words wet with your sweetness

          honey tongued and soft with desire

 

I drink from your lips

a breath of beauty

                   your beauty

                            forever etched upon my promised heart

                                      and you are lovely

Reviews

[Helena]

"You came to me
like April
slow and sweet"

Well that drew me in straight away and of course the beautiful photo. I knew I was going to be in for a treat when MsJewel picks up her golden pen to weave her magic on the the page!
Thank you for submitting this beauty to my contest and good luck!
Helena

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment Helena and for the opportunity to submit to your contest :) Julie

[Helena]

You are most welcome anytime Julie!

Helena

[Richard🖌]

You make reading a tender pleasure! : )

[Mirror]

lovely. i found this bring warmth into my belly. and the picture is verrrry beautiful

[Richard🖌]

Goodness-ME, Julie!
If this heavenly flow of poetically embracing affection doesn't win the contest, I can't imagine what it will take.
I think I just fell in-love with poetry all over again! 😊

You ever feel as though your every fiber has been kissed and caressed(?) … ummm, I love every word, line verse, feeling, emotion, and sensation derived from this one, M'Lady … warmest thank you hugs! ⁓ Richard

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind comment and compliment. I appreciate you. :) Julie

[Stephen]

I drink from your lips
a breath of beauty
your beauty
forever etched upon my promised heart

~~ Peace ~~

Beautiful poem. Here few seductive drops of love you`ve poured into words with your own feelings of love. I admire this write again ~~ Now after reading your stuffs, what i`m thinking`s that I should admire you, Woman .. yeah .. I admire you, Honey .. your very good at writing sexy stuffs.

~~ Stay Blessed, Sweety ~~

[MsJewel]

Thank you for the lovely comment and compliment. :) Julie

[Raymond Federle]

Honey'd lines never sweetened a page more lightly...Well done! :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you Raymond :) Julie

[kitty cat]

lovely peom, i love it, great job

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[kitty cat]

your welcome

[yash]

I Really loved your metaphors, specially the perfume of passion. It's great, simply poetic.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

again you paint such love lines with how you brush your words onto the white canvass.

jacob

[MsJewel]

Thank you Jacob :) Julie

[sodapopkid]

This is really pretty. I like the images with their soft edges.

[MsJewel]

Thank you:) Julie