Open Windows

Open Windows

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ just a scribble ~

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photograph compliments of pinterest

 

 

 

Love

open the window of my soul

and lift the cloud of lace curtains

colorless in the mist of this rainy night

 

Look past the wishing well of tender memories

still echoing with each heartbeat

(filled with longing for you)

 

So I may reach out

and hold the hands of time

 

Remembering…

 

You

who taught me

with beauty and grace

 

“When your dreams like stars fall like rain from the sky,

dance in the rain

and tomorrow will bring sunshine and sweet daisies

if you listen to your heart”

 

Love changes everything….even from a distance

 

Yes my angel,

the window is open

~~~

© 2014 MsJewel


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Sometimes Julie, I read your poems and wonder is it dreams that fall like rain, or is it the wonderful images that dance in my head??? Is it the wishing well of tender memories, or is it that you make time stand still?? I think even with the windows open, you must invite love in... Julie, I am always in awe of the way you write.
~~redzone

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Years Ago

Curt, thank you for the lovely comment and compliment. I appreciate you! :) Julie



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Great write! Very fluid and written with a beautiful choice of words ;)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
I guess you've heard the saying. " If you love something let them go, if they come back they are yours, if they don't they never where."
An open window. The metaphores.
Such feeling and passion.
Sometimes wonder if it's the images you use that give inspiration or the poetry that searches for the image.
Really superb piece, again.
My dear friend this is an inspired piece. I've added it to my (short) library collection.

Posted 7 Years Ago


MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words, my dear friend. I appreciate you. As far as the images I select - I .. read more
MAD ENGLISHMAN

7 Years Ago

You've obviously got a good eye.
I am hopelessly in love with this write!! Stunning piece here and I am so sad I did not get to read this sooner!! Love with an open window.....

Fantastic!! Truly breath taking. I am rendered speechless!!

This is going into my favorites! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment Madalyn. :) Julie
Such a powerful poem........and the ending was executed perfectlyy... amazing poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it :) Julie
Papatunde

7 Years Ago

so detailed absolutely amazing
the picture went perfectly with this poem, soft and graceful. I felt the emotions:) Love the first stanza!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you. I'm thrilled you felt this one. :) Julie
The picture is beautiful. xx

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
Love does change you. That's for sure

Posted 7 Years Ago


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MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Yes BR - I believe it does :) Julie
This opens a window to a whole new kind of rain dance. You were taught well my friend by a loving angel

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
dear Julie.. to reach out and touch the
hands of time... when dreams like stars
fall like rain... Romance is all about feeling...
You are the epitome of romance. Your
words dance in emotions of three quarters time
and lovely soft celestial rhyme. truly... Pat

Posted 7 Years Ago


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MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Your comments mean so much to me. Thank you dear friend :) Julie
Your words are always so soothing it amazes me.You have written another beauty here Jules.I love it but you wrote it so I knew I would :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

You are so sweet. Thank you for the wonderful comment and compliment :) Julie
Vidya Bacchus

7 Years Ago

You are welcome :)

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart. I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's. I enjoy rec.. more..

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