Open Windows

~ just a scribble ~

photograph compliments of pinterest

 

 

 

Love

open the window of my soul

and lift the cloud of lace curtains

colorless in the mist of this rainy night

 

Look past the wishing well of tender memories

still echoing with each heartbeat

(filled with longing for you)

 

So I may reach out

and hold the hands of time

 

Remembering…

 

You

who taught me

with beauty and grace

 

“When your dreams like stars fall like rain from the sky,

dance in the rain

and tomorrow will bring sunshine and sweet daisies

if you listen to your heart”

 

Love changes everything….even from a distance

 

Yes my angel,

the window is open

~~~

Reviews

[light and ashes]

"So I may reach out

and hold the hands of time


Remembering…


You

who taught me

with beauty and grace."

These lines added so much to the loveliness of this poem.
I would however make a suggestion.
In the lines that follow, I had a little confusion reading it.
I had to read it two or three times to make sense of it.
I would add a comma to sort out the confusion.

So it would read,

“When your dreams like stars,

fall like rain from the sky,

dance in the rain

and tomorrow will bring sunshine and sweet daisies

if you listen to your heart."

Overall, it was a lovely poem and I did enjoy reading.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Your words are always so soothing it amazes me.You have written another beauty here Jules.I love it but you wrote it so I knew I would :)

[MsJewel]

You are so sweet. Thank you for the wonderful comment and compliment :) Julie

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[wordman]

I really liked this one Julie great stanzas

[MsJewel]

Thank you Ron :) Julie

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Dearest Julie,

You are one of a kind, a TRUE Romantic artist!....even when the rain falls you take your readers to the most beautiful place, turning the sad rain into falling stars of dreams and sunshine.

I am delighted to read such a hopeful piece.
Eloquently written, sweet friend!~xoxo~:)

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend! Hugs, Julie

[willweb]

This poem is beautiful. Affectionate and soft. I enjoyed reading it today.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for the lovely comment. :) Julie

[Zoey M]

..I just loved it..I just have a request that plxxx keep writing such kinds of beautiful poems... :)

[Fran Marie]

Blissfully beautiful in vivid imagery...it flows across the page in sheer elegance...nice work

[MsJewel]

Thank you Fran :) Julie

[s y e]

// Look past the wishing well of tender memories
still echoing with each heartbeat
(filled with longing for you) //

Holy moly girlie, you are so utterly talented and write so eloquently. I really enjoy reading your poems and the journey you take me on when I read it... Loved the imagery and as always, the artwork is gorgeous!

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one. Your comments always leave me with a smile :) Julie

[Latifa]

open the window of my soul
and lift the cloud of lace curtains
colorless in the mist of this rainy night
stunning poetry dear Jewel , your words are echoing in my heart with lovely rythme of beauty.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

I'm soaking in the beauty of your words, the inviting verses of angelic grace and the waking of inner senses. A wonderful poem...:).....................

[MsJewel]

You are very sweet Sami. Thank you for the lovely comment :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).............................

[Coyote Poetry]

"Love changes everything….even from a distance"
Old wise saying. "love makes the world goes around." Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Thank you! :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Julie.

[Ladysue]

What a beautiful first verse and each one thereafter, even more stunning. This angelic poem humbled me..Love does change everything..your ending, brilliant and moving..truly exquisite writing..A pleasure to read.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your wonderful comment. :) Julie

[Ladysue]

it was my pleasure.. :)