Forever in My Heart

Forever in My Heart

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ heartprint ~

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Art ~ Carolina Gogalniceanu

 

 

Today

        I brought you flowers

a dozen carnations in red, white and blue

 

I would have picked them from mama’s garden

but it seems her flowers have refused to acknowledge springtime

this year

 

No this year

I bought them from a woman with grey hair

and bright pink lipstick,

           who blessed me

as she stroked the big yellow tabby

catching a nap in the shade of her folding chair

 

I wanted poppies…

in remembrance of the little red paper ones

you handed out in front of the grocery store on Veterans Day

 

You always looked so handsome in your dress uniform

proudly displaying your medals

        So tall…so strong…so brave…a hero

                         My hero…

 

Today

I brought you flowers…

           carnations

but in my heart…they are poppies

 

I love you Dad

Happy Father’s Day

 

© 2014 MsJewel


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There are so many hidden little gems in this write. The loss of a mother, the pride in a military man you know as your father, and the faith and loving devotion of a daughter all shine bright upon the colors of tribute you penned here Julie. A gift of poetry I am sure your father will cherish more than anything you could have bought for him.
I like how this ties in with your red poppy poem as well btw...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind and generous comment. Have a lovely evening my friend! :) Julie



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There are so many hidden little gems in this write. The loss of a mother, the pride in a military man you know as your father, and the faith and loving devotion of a daughter all shine bright upon the colors of tribute you penned here Julie. A gift of poetry I am sure your father will cherish more than anything you could have bought for him.
I like how this ties in with your red poppy poem as well btw...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind and generous comment. Have a lovely evening my friend! :) Julie
Aww truly lovely and descriptive lines Jules.Your love for your father shines through my friend :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie
Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
ASHIDASH

9 Years Ago

U have depicted your own heart. I can see right through your heart and can feel what a great man you.. read more
Once again you show your very deep feelings for your Dad, in this very beautifully written poem, I know how much you really miss him.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

I do miss him alot Larry, but I do have all those lovely memories. Thanks for stopping by. :) Julie
Wow...You took my heart away with this one..
So glad to read :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie
This is a beautiful and heart touching poem. This poem is a perfect display of the love and pride that you have for your father.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for taking the time to read and leave a lovely comment. I appreciate it very much :) Julie
Aayushi

9 Years Ago

You are welcome. :)
This is beautiful and very touching

And he knows, sweetie. ..... love is eternal.

Trace.


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you Trace. You know how much I miss him - he was far from perfect, but the perfect father for .. read more
Trace

9 Years Ago

Kids always see the best of their dads and forgive the rest.
I wish I had have known my dad.
MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Me too sweetie...
This poem was beautiful and touching Julie. A grand tribute of love to your father. I enjoyed reading this today.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
Holy moly, the tears are just pouring out. This is the most beautiful, heartfelt Fathers Day poem, I have ever read. You touched my heart.. very moving.

Big hugs.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

You are very sweet. Thank you :) Julie
May he Rest In Peace❤
Very heartfelt conveyance,Miss Julie 😍

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
That is just so moving… I really almost shed a tear reading this poem… brilliantly moving.

Let me add that you are a fantastic storyteller.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

You are very kind..not really a story..just a poem about taking flowers to my dad today. He was an a.. read more
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

9 Years Ago

Well I know that but you told it like a storyteller should,very descriptive… that is not a scribb.. read more
MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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MsJewel
MsJewel

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