Perhaps We Are Vines...( a collaboration with Trace)

Perhaps We Are Vines...( a collaboration with Trace)

A Poem by MsJewel
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perhaps...

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Perhaps we are vines

gently intertwined

strong, yet vulnerable

as we nurture tiny buds of loveliness

hearts etched with sunlight…

 

Like a summer morning

dew kissed and glistening

diamond light

           melting

                  into ribbons of delight…

 

Wrapping us in poetic ecstasy

 

Leaves quiver,

flowers bloom

and seasons change…

 

                 We have changed

                         

Still, we remain

gently intertwined 

                   

                    Perhaps we are vines….

                                     

Growing stronger

as buds bloom to beautiful flowers

beckoning to be adorned

           by dreamers

                       and lovers

and those longing to dress their worlds

         in romantic colors of bliss…

 

So when evening falls

and the sun sets on a misty shore

the essence of the bloom will

                    shimmer

as stars dance in the sky

in a serenade of sweet lullabies

         weaving delicious dreams

            til petals fall

                 like rain

 

in the softest shower of possibilities

 

Certain  when morning comes

with the dew

         and the hope

of the next new bud to surely bloom again…

 

still we remain

with a poem in our hearts

 

Perhaps we are more than vines…

 

                          Perhaps…

        we are star-crossed

 

© 2014 MsJewel


Author's Note

MsJewel
Thank you Trace. It is always a delight to write with you my dear friend.

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Another gorgeous poetic duet from you two. So seamless and so perfetly written. This one wrapped around me like Queen Anne's Wreath on an old wooden arbor. (I am the old arbor) :) Julie and Trace, how you write these, I don't know. How long you write these, I hope forever.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment. I appreciate you and your friendship :) Julie
Trace

5 Years Ago

Thank you so very much for your wonderful compliments.

Trace.



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What a beautiful write. Nicely penned. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


A outstanding poem. I do believe we are vines. Each of us part of one branch. Needing each other.
"Perhaps we are more than vines…
Perhaps…
we are star-crossed"
Thank you dear Julie for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


this is just beautifully penned. bravo

Posted 5 Years Ago


such a lovely inspired poem from the both of you

Posted 5 Years Ago


"Perhaps we are more than vines…
Perhaps…
we are star-crossed"
beautiful work, well done ladies

Posted 5 Years Ago


Perhaps is always pretty and with your words it has become much more prettier.
Very nice collaboration.. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


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the two of you are always amazing and this wonderful write proves that!

Posted 5 Years Ago


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5 Years Ago

p.s perhaps you and trace are of the same vine
Perhaps the two of you are sharing the same soul....for when you collaborate, it is seamless and sweet. Lacy soft imagery in this one. I wanted to crawl between the lines to take an afternoon nap. Beautifully written. Lydi**

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment Lydi :) Julie
Trace

5 Years Ago

Thank you so very much. It is ALWAYS nice to hear from you.

Trace
The emotion in this piece is strong and when entwined with such beautiful imagery it flows so effortlessly. Just wonderful

Regards
Troy

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

5 Years Ago

Thank you Troy. It is always a delight when you visit. :) Julie
Beautiful metaphor and analogy here. Great work kids

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart. I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's. I enjoy rec.. more..

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