Moments

~ a love scribble ~

 

Mark Arian Art

 

 

 

~~~

Quiet as a whisper

softly as can be

As dim as a shadow

sweeps a memory

 

When it's least expected

though faded and unclear

a feeling so divine

tells me you are near

 

For a precious moment

if only for a while

the comfort you bring

leaves me with a smile...

 

~~~

 

 

Reviews

[Nidheesh Sankaran]

i learnt something from the poems theme......... wen u r siting alone u r confronted by a soft sweet memory........wich u hav never expected that it would come at that very time...............though that memory is a bt blurr but it fills u with a sense of happiness and a smile on ur face.......... nice nice....... n cool use of words.........

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you felt this one. Thanks so much for your kind comment :) Julie

[Nidheesh Sankaran]

That all depicts a nice creation miss

[BL]

What a beautifully sad thought, image and connection

[Ti]

Truly beautifully written. This poem goes so well with the piece of art work by Mark Arian.
Is the angel possibly, this shadow? A love who has passed away and is shadowing this character, loving her from afar? So sad, but it's that sadness that intrigues us throughout this poem - beautiful.

[Steve L.]

The people who we have true connections with will always be on our "radar"...especially when the connections are emotional and sexual.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind comment Steve :) Julie

[Dara]

What would we do without those fond memories, even those fleeting ones. Your words touched my heart. Simply beautiful!

[MsJewel]

Thank you. It's lovely to see you! :) julie

[R Smith]

this is a perfect example of the stunning beauty of poetry, the simple tale that is told beautifully without the need for over the top expressions. Fantastic work, in my library straight away.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Richard :) Julie

[R Smith]

your very welcome Julie

[Aayushi]

Sometimes when its dark a simple sweet memory can bring some brightness in life. Even though that just a memory but for a while it takes us to the happy place. Nice poem.

[MsJewel]

Yes, treasured memories...thank you my sweet friend :) julie

[Aayushi]

You are welcome...

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Loves memories linger in the minds' shadows.
Another great write from you.
loved it.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind comment and compliment. Have a lovely day my friend :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

Always good to be left with a smile. I like the gentle flow of the poem leading to the very nice ending. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend. :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Luissanto]

This piece is both beautiful and elegant... What a great balance.
A truly incredible piece.

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thank you :) Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

Soft and sweet reflection in this one. The font style and color were a little difficult to read, but it was worth it when I did! Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Thank you Lydi - I'll make the font a little bolder and maybe that will help. Have a lovely day lovely lady! :) Julie