Moments

Moments

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a love scribble ~

"

 

Mark Arian Art

 

 

 

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Quiet as a whisper

softly as can be

As dim as a shadow

sweeps a memory

 

When it's least expected

though faded and unclear

a feeling so divine

tells me you are near

 

For a precious moment

if only for a while

the comfort you bring

leaves me with a smile...

 

~~~

 

 

© 2014 MsJewel


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i learnt something from the poems theme......... wen u r siting alone u r confronted by a soft sweet memory........wich u hav never expected that it would come at that very time...............though that memory is a bt blurr but it fills u with a sense of happiness and a smile on ur face.......... nice nice....... n cool use of words.........

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you felt this one. Thanks so much for your kind comment :) Julie
Nidheesh Sankaran

9 Years Ago

That all depicts a nice creation miss



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This warms my heart, Julie...

You paint memories in the softest colours...love should always feel this way.

Beautifully penned!~xoxo~:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you lovely lady :) Julie
even if "it is only for awhile"
it's worth it, just to have that feeling.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

I agree Jacob. Thank you :) Julie
i learnt something from the poems theme......... wen u r siting alone u r confronted by a soft sweet memory........wich u hav never expected that it would come at that very time...............though that memory is a bt blurr but it fills u with a sense of happiness and a smile on ur face.......... nice nice....... n cool use of words.........

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you felt this one. Thanks so much for your kind comment :) Julie
Nidheesh Sankaran

9 Years Ago

That all depicts a nice creation miss
in love with love i am :) blissful mood created; i breath a sigh
E.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
That was very well done, i enjoyed this

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
two souls searching in the night

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you Ron :) Julie
Spiritual connection between two spirits can be incredible! Lovely poem :)♥

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie
This is your genre, where you shine. A warm, romantic, and loving piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for supporting my scribbles. I appreciate you :) Julie

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Added on July 31, 2014
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Tags: love, loss, memories, comfort, hope, msjewel, poetry

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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