Painted of a Rose

Painted of a Rose

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a romantic little scribble ~

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art ~ compliments of pinterest

 

 

 

When we were one  heartbeat strong

                 united

we lured the sunlight in each dewy dawn

silken, soft and secrets shared in whispers

our skin a blush

                    painted of a rose

 

Blooming sweet daydreams, petals fluttered

upon the winds of time

                         ‘til blown away

I fade to white, the fall of snow impending

and yet the lust of spring still lingers on

 

My heart beats faster, though so much softer

aching for your charms

                      a hunger known

new love may find me…perhaps tomorrow

yet not quite as sweet when compared

to a heartbeat strong once united

 

when we were one

                      painted of a rose

© 2014 MsJewel


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The painted scene is full of very pure gestures and wishes. The painting by words of light of serene of excitement they all seem to reconvene as life seems to unfold and the presence of a new love may be arriving. So as the possibility becomes ever more real the heart beats faster in anticipation in hunger yet not a comnparision for the love that used to be.

But an opening....

Thankyou

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie


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The sweetness of your words compliment your soul's smiling face. You are the sugar of love Jewel.

Regards,
Al

Posted 3 Years Ago


This is the poetry of love that I have come to expect from one so talented. I can feel therpassion and love between the lines.
Good one.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

4 Years Ago

You are very kind. thank you :) Julie
that was so great, as aalways elegant, well done

Posted 5 Years Ago


Yeah,I like this. Some passion,some thing a lot of people have forgotten about.

Posted 5 Years Ago


I read this a few days ago...
It left me feeling nostalgic.
Simply beautiful!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Enchanting poem, I really like your style... :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

5 Years Ago

Thank you! :) Julie
Now THIS is an incredible romantic poem. All you have to do is read it to know why I never write romantic poems. I can't do the genre anywhere near the justice you can.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment BR. I admire your wit and the power of your words,.. read more
This is painted with a wistful brush. It is filled with whispers and sighs. You've created a gentle scene and a quiet lamentation when we were one of painted of rose. That is a beautiful line.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie
The painted scene is full of very pure gestures and wishes. The painting by words of light of serene of excitement they all seem to reconvene as life seems to unfold and the presence of a new love may be arriving. So as the possibility becomes ever more real the heart beats faster in anticipation in hunger yet not a comnparision for the love that used to be.

But an opening....

Thankyou

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
Wow....m very powerful poetry here.
This can be read so many ways and interpreted even more.

You write with such emotion and let your pen spill your heart upon the page.

Very beautiful work.

Huggs. Trace

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

5 Years Ago

Thank you Trace. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) Julie

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