Yesterday's Rain

Yesterday's Rain

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a sensual love scribble ~

"

 

               

art ~ compliments of pinterest

 

 

You knew me by heart

                                            and I loved you first

 

You touched me in the dark

no sun,

                          moon,

                                       nor starlight was needed

your eyes were covered with my words

my dreams with your fantasy

on a pillow, scented with desire

you found the place

                                 where winds rise

                                                and flowers burn…

 

Your love rained upon me

                                  silk to my skin

I caught every raindrop

                selfishly

                                 quenching my thirst

 

Touch me..

                                  like yesterday’s rain

and let the winds stir

as we recite each others poetry

and I will feel you

deep in my soul as you move me

 

I am free

I am a goddess

I run through a garden of flowers

                    passion blooming grace

 I am a quiver

                                wet in your rain

            and you will remember…

 

You knew me by heart

                                              and I loved you first

© 2014 MsJewel


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Amazing words.
"I am free
I am a goddess
I run through a garden of flowers
passion blooming grace
I am a quiver
wet in your rain
and you will remember…"
I love the words above. Create good vision and places. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your always encouraging comments. :) Julie



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it feels so relishing and beautiful to go through your words
it is like the nectar of black sweet grapes kissing your taste buds!
you are a beautiful writer

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the wonderful comment and compliment. I'm humbled. :) Julie
Such a loving and breathtaking poem I love how soft and beautifully your words flow together in this one with so tenderness in it. :) Larry

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you Larry :) Julie
oh man! so delicious and exquisite .. this blows me away ..
"You touched me in the dark

no sun,

moon,

nor starlight was needed

your eyes were covered with my words

my dreams with your fantasy

on a pillow, scented with desire

you found the place

where winds rise

and flowers burn…"
so good! .. burns like x rated but reads like ... love
E.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed this poem. Thank you for your wonderful comment. You made my day! :) Julie
Scented with desire you found the place where winds rise & flowers burn.

Here is where I found "The Poetic Goddess". Enchanting, captivating, a surreal kind of beauty.



Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind and generous review. :)Julie
Love this poem. The visual really moves the piece. My favorite lines are below:

Your love rained upon me
silk to my skin

Touch me..
like yesterday’s rain



Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

You're welcome.
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Ben
Nice poem, I really love your choice of words and the way you actually made what you feel inside in form of words; great work

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words Ben :) Julie
Sultry with passion gaining the upper hand in this sensuous bit of poetry. So many great lines, and passages throughout the poem. You are a true teller of tales . . .

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie
Touching, thinking of my deceased husband as I read this..Valentine


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind comment. I'm sorry for your loss
Julie
If I could write like you Julie my reviews of your poetry would accurately convey exactly how your words always affect me. I do not have the ability to write out this that I feel right now except to say, I loved this poem. The love, the desire and the needs you pen have a heart beat all their own and they live within us all. Most of us just can not say it as beautifully as you do.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment. It warms my heart to know that my poetry finds a p.. read more
A wonderfully visual painting of a lovely time and that time lost.

Enjoyed this poem.

Trace


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you Trace :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

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