All Our Roses

All Our Roses

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ heartprints ~

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                 art ~ Arthur Braginsky

 

 

               As autumn finds her golden fall

and winter winds begin to call

soon branches on the tallest trees

stand naked in the restless breeze

and vines begin to ache below

no shelter for a roses glow

 

Of springtime rain, of summer sun

of hearts that beat only for one

in shades of love ‘til seasons play

teasing tethers  in disarray

bound forever, now break away

senseless lover of yesterday

 

Should I cry or moan, I fear

we took our love for granted dear

and now the rose upon the vine

lies wilting in the hands of time

as what was new, now feels so old

fading slowly in autumn’s cold

 

Have all our roses blushed?

© 2014 MsJewel


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I`m impressed.
I haven`t read your 'rhythmic' poetry in a long-time. So, it`s good to read your words with such rhymes. Your art`s getting explored... in anew artistry which`s way good for your lovers. I find one thing `bout your stuffs that they`re written in every pose (creative-art/forms/formats) & well expressed with the worth of meaning as well as your talent through the very hues of your "rosy" words. Nice work.

I`d be writing you reviews in bulk (reading your beautiful stuffs) this day!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Years Ago

Your very sweet Stephen. Thank you :) Julie
Stephen

6 Years Ago

Even the reason of my notorious sweetness just belongs to your bare heart (spiritual beauty). So, it.. read more



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Great writing style. And very heartfelt.

Can't wait to read your other works.

Posted 5 Years Ago


I`m impressed.
I haven`t read your 'rhythmic' poetry in a long-time. So, it`s good to read your words with such rhymes. Your art`s getting explored... in anew artistry which`s way good for your lovers. I find one thing `bout your stuffs that they`re written in every pose (creative-art/forms/formats) & well expressed with the worth of meaning as well as your talent through the very hues of your "rosy" words. Nice work.

I`d be writing you reviews in bulk (reading your beautiful stuffs) this day!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Years Ago

Your very sweet Stephen. Thank you :) Julie
Stephen

6 Years Ago

Even the reason of my notorious sweetness just belongs to your bare heart (spiritual beauty). So, it.. read more
Nature is the best way to describe the feeling of love and how it raises and falls. I was especially intrigued on how you ended it with a question leaving the audience wondering. I love to think so that last line made me think did this lover care at all??? Though it is apparent that the two of them did have fun despite the trails of the relationship the reader still got the sense of romance from the both of them but at last still the two lover went there separate ways but why??? Very nice I shall be reading plenty more of your writings...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very meaningful and elegant! Great word choice and phrase linkage 💗💗💗💗

Posted 7 Years Ago


May it be seasonal Princess...you deserve the bloom...the fragrance and the beauty..

Scotty

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you Scott. It's always lovely to see you :) Julie
You've taken us through the seasons of love....through the circle of life from puppy love, to long lasting love, to loss. Bittersweet and heartfelt, your words are touching, Julie. The rhyming is flawless. The rhythm is charismatic. You are so talented. Lydi**

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Lydi. I've learned so much from you over the years...and look to you as one of th.. read more
Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

Julie, you just made my day. Thank you.
A soft and questioned sadness blooms in his poem Julie. The wilted rose upon the bush, chilled by autumn's wind, its stem bent over in loneliness, faded petals facing the ground wondering, will I be loved again. But come spring, new blooms, new smiles and a brand new happiness will adorn this wonderful art of nature. Your poems always touch me, no matter the emotion, I feel it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoy my scribbles. Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie
There is a season for everything. Some things only last for one others have a longer duration. But when the rose withers on the vine both pain and questions are left in its wake.

Should I cry or moan, I fear
we took our love for granted dear
and now the rose upon the vine
lies wilting in the hands of time
as what was new, now feels so old
fading slowly in autumn’s cold


Have all our roses blushed?



Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
This was absolutely beautiful! Very powerful, yet graceful in it's strength. :-)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
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B.J
Such a lovely tribute to the words of poetry..Brilliant

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment! :) Julie
B.J

7 Years Ago

your welcome

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MsJewel
MsJewel

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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart. I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's. I enjoy rec.. more..

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