Captured

Captured

A Poem by MsJewel
"

~ a simple little love scribble ~

"

                       art ~ Mark Arian

 

 

                A prisoner of your love

           not wanting to break free

 

I’m bound to your heart

            and tethered completely

 

Mesmerized,

                                    hypnotized

I’m spellbound, it's true

Captivated,

                                     entwined

 

I’m

        tangled

                        up

                               in

                                    you

 

A prisoner of your love

         not wanting to break free

 

Caught within the beauty

                   of a love that’s

                                     captured me

© 2014 MsJewel


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this kind of being a prisoner is really delightful, because this is case of giving yourself up because you want to be incarcerated in someone else's heart.

beautiful metaphor here, Julie...
such soft texture to your words...you are a kind person...it shows through in your words.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Jacob, thank you. That is one of the nicest compliments. I try to be a kind person. :) Julie



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In bondage to the magnificent...
How very lovely.

Scott

Posted 7 Years Ago


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MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you Scott :) Julie
dear Julie... your poetry is an intimate
dance of passions... the ebb and flo
of eternal love. Lovely as the breath
of Autumn frost against a window pane.
truly... Pat

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

You are so sweet Pat. Thank you my dear friend. Hugs, Julie
this poem is really quite beautiful and I would love to read more of
your work soon . I am loving this poem its a delightful read and I'd gladly read it again and again .

Posted 7 Years Ago


MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. I look forward to reading you.. read more
Child Spirit

7 Years Ago

:) it's my pleasure Julie.
Beautiful Julie, just so lovely, a dedication to love written with sensual rhyme and perfect style, a true gem of poetry, thank you :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you Richard :) Julie
Love has a way of making us a prisoner and your words have captured the essence so beautifully. I also love the image you have to go with it. Fits perfectly with the prose :-)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you lovely lady! :) Julie
First of all I have to tell you I usually do not like the photos and videos that go with poems, however, your photos are very unique and I really enjoy them! I forgot to tell you how much I loved the one from your poem Decorated!
Caught within the beauty
of a love that’s
captured me...loved these lines!
Your sentiment and flow are always so perfect! I really have enjoyed all of your poems, they create such an image and hold the readers heart while they are reading them! Well done!


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank for your lovely comment and compliment. I appreciate it very much :) Julie
this is absolutely exquisite.. the font, the picture, the flow, the sentiment, and the phrasing.. I am always enchanted by your love scribbles which are anything but.. can FEEL the emotion as it flows from your magical pen down the page.. one small suggestion, just my opinion, but would cut "and" out of the second stanza, flows better in my head that way... otherwise STUNNING work Julie.. you are such a captivating, elegant, shining spirit that glows in everything you do..

Posted 7 Years Ago


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MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much April. I like your suggestion, it does flow better! Hugs to you my friend.
Ju.. read more
We are helpless in front of love. This feeling beautifully reflects through your words.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
Gorgeous Julie, when we find a love like this it's hard not to get tangled up in it. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you lovely lady :) Julie
It is lovely to be a willing captive to such beautiful emotions. Your construction of the poem, only adds to the deep emotion of your words.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

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MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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