Captured

~ a simple little love scribble ~

                       art ~ Mark Arian

 

 

                A prisoner of your love

           not wanting to break free

 

I’m bound to your heart

            and tethered completely

 

Mesmerized,

                                    hypnotized

I’m spellbound, it's true

Captivated,

                                     entwined

 

I’m

        tangled

                        up

                               in

                                    you

 

A prisoner of your love

         not wanting to break free

 

Caught within the beauty

                   of a love that’s

                                     captured me

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this kind of being a prisoner is really delightful, because this is case of giving yourself up because you want to be incarcerated in someone else's heart.

beautiful metaphor here, Julie...
such soft texture to your words...you are a kind person...it shows through in your words.

[MsJewel]

Jacob, thank you. That is one of the nicest compliments. I try to be a kind person. :) Julie

[Scott Metro]

In bondage to the magnificent...
How very lovely.

Scott

[MsJewel]

Thank you Scott :) Julie

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Julie... your poetry is an intimate
dance of passions... the ebb and flo
of eternal love. Lovely as the breath
of Autumn frost against a window pane.
truly... Pat

[MsJewel]

You are so sweet Pat. Thank you my dear friend. Hugs, Julie

[Child Spirit]

this poem is really quite beautiful and I would love to read more of
your work soon . I am loving this poem its a delightful read and I'd gladly read it again and again .

[MsJewel]

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. I look forward to reading your poetry as well. :) Julie

[Child Spirit]

:) it's my pleasure Julie.

[R Smith]

Beautiful Julie, just so lovely, a dedication to love written with sensual rhyme and perfect style, a true gem of poetry, thank you :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you Richard :) Julie

[Dara]

Love has a way of making us a prisoner and your words have captured the essence so beautifully. I also love the image you have to go with it. Fits perfectly with the prose :-)

[MsJewel]

Thank you lovely lady! :) Julie

[RAOrourke]

First of all I have to tell you I usually do not like the photos and videos that go with poems, however, your photos are very unique and I really enjoy them! I forgot to tell you how much I loved the one from your poem Decorated!
Caught within the beauty
of a love that’s
captured me...loved these lines!
Your sentiment and flow are always so perfect! I really have enjoyed all of your poems, they create such an image and hold the readers heart while they are reading them! Well done!

[MsJewel]

Thank for your lovely comment and compliment. I appreciate it very much :) Julie

[AprilRN1210]

this is absolutely exquisite.. the font, the picture, the flow, the sentiment, and the phrasing.. I am always enchanted by your love scribbles which are anything but.. can FEEL the emotion as it flows from your magical pen down the page.. one small suggestion, just my opinion, but would cut "and" out of the second stanza, flows better in my head that way... otherwise STUNNING work Julie.. you are such a captivating, elegant, shining spirit that glows in everything you do..

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much April. I like your suggestion, it does flow better! Hugs to you my friend.
Julie

[Avinash]

We are helpless in front of love. This feeling beautifully reflects through your words.

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[Matching Socks]

Gorgeous Julie, when we find a love like this it's hard not to get tangled up in it. :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you lovely lady :) Julie

[icelandicblue]

It is lovely to be a willing captive to such beautiful emotions. Your construction of the poem, only adds to the deep emotion of your words.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie