Captured

~ a simple little love scribble ~

                       art ~ Mark Arian

 

 

                A prisoner of your love

           not wanting to break free

 

I’m bound to your heart

            and tethered completely

 

Mesmerized,

                                    hypnotized

I’m spellbound, it's true

Captivated,

                                     entwined

 

I’m

        tangled

                        up

                               in

                                    you

 

A prisoner of your love

         not wanting to break free

 

Caught within the beauty

                   of a love that’s

                                     captured me

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this kind of being a prisoner is really delightful, because this is case of giving yourself up because you want to be incarcerated in someone else's heart.

beautiful metaphor here, Julie...
such soft texture to your words...you are a kind person...it shows through in your words.

[MsJewel]

Jacob, thank you. That is one of the nicest compliments. I try to be a kind person. :) Julie

[Trace]

I love this soft and delicate poem, I love that painting too,
I was going to use that image for a poem that I wrote for you a few years ago.

Not sure what happened to it, Need to go find my notes.

SO anyhow, your poem is the perfect accompany for this art, or should I say the art is perfect for your poem.

Very much enjoyed this.

HUGGS>>>>Trace

[MsJewel]

Thank you Sweet Beast. Hugs, Julie

[wordman]

this sounds like a beautiful love song to me julie

[MsJewel]

thanks so much Ron :) Julie

[Cody Williams]

Great write Julie! Very tender. Thanks for sharing!

-CW

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie

[Zakari Schmidt]

You don't stand at the bars in a jail cell painted the color of your lovers eyes. You dream :) such a sweet poem Julie!

[MsJewel]

Thank you sweet Zachary! :) Julie

[stars are far]

Thatw as so wonderful, they way you express your love here is amazing, and very elegant, well done :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Woody]

boy, this is no infatuation! this is the real deal and I like that. in love there should be no holding back.
you're a terrific romantic poet MsJewel.

[MsJewel]

thank you for the lovely comment and compliment Woody :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and amazing poetry. I love your poetry. I need poetry to take me to better places and thoughts. Thank you dear Poet for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Thank you for the wonderful compliment. I enjoy your poetry as well. :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You do keep us prisoners to your poetic beauty that willingly we never want to break free. Ah, how you capture the eternal freedom of love...:).......................

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely words Sami :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).......

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Very smooth Julie, in the way you worded it and the feelings you expressed. Sure to make that man it is for swoon.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Sweet Cowboy :) Julie