Quiet Whispers

Quiet Whispers

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a collaboration with Trace ~

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Gently intertwined

vines tremble

as the wind quietly whispers

with the scent of roses

 

Beauty fills my heart

and words interlace

rising in a delicate mist

                         of the sweetest inspiration….

 

               

 

Gather me in your embrace

so you can see inside my soul

my reflection…

with mere words

 

A melody….

      your melody

etched upon my heart

lingering in a lullaby for two

 

The sweetest rhapsody

like a pairing of birds

winging to heaven

           as the world pauses...

 

  Lend me your lips

                 so I may taste your magic

mysterious and silky

          like showers of dewdrops

wet

as a falling tear

 

As soft as the beauty

that fills my heart

with quiet whispers

          and the scent of roses

 

…blooming only for you

 

 

© 2014 MsJewel


Author's Note

MsJewel
art by Lauri Blank

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As soft as velvet, your words wrapped round my heart. Julie, this is just so beautifully romantic!
" Lend me your lips

so I may taste your magic

mysterious and silky"

And yes, worthy of at least one heavy sigh! You write romance like no one else can. Lydi**

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you Lydi. I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one. Trace and I collaborated on it. He is always s.. read more
Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

OMG....sorry I did not realize it. I should have. When the two of you blend ink, it is always a pl.. read more



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I like this poem a lot! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lovely read friend...............

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

thank you :) Julie
Your ideas bloom like flowers in a garden, no matter the season. Always beautiful and captivating

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

You are very kind :) Julie
As soft as velvet, your words wrapped round my heart. Julie, this is just so beautifully romantic!
" Lend me your lips

so I may taste your magic

mysterious and silky"

And yes, worthy of at least one heavy sigh! You write romance like no one else can. Lydi**

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you Lydi. I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one. Trace and I collaborated on it. He is always s.. read more
Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

OMG....sorry I did not realize it. I should have. When the two of you blend ink, it is always a pl.. read more
Jewel my friend. You are to beauty and romance what I am to sarcasm and swearing. This was perfect, like presentation, flow, mood, 5 stars all the way. Excellent work

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
╰☆╮Sigh...every time I read one of your poems, they make me just sit back and remember the peace of life. This is a wonderful collaboration.╰☆╮

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you dear one. I hope all is well with you! :) Julie
so pretty, this art by Lauri Blank must have taken a long while to draw, these things take so much time, so many hours and hours of a day, it is quite amazing, something to like just watch and wonder where its all going or taking us, what do we do each moment when the roses are packaged up from there greenhouses for February or in June when the roses are growing outside, what are we to do who have no money for fertilizer or rose food, or new plants from the nurseries, I don't know what to do about it, thinking that this is a variety of flower which makes us quite happy the scent of it

Posted 7 Years Ago


MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem :) Julie
Not only beautifully written and formatted but, displaying words only truly caring, genuine people can create.

'.. As soft as the beauty .. that fills my heart .. with quiet whispers

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words Emmajoy! :) Julie
What happened to my review???????

Here goes again.

Thank you my sweetest friend and writing partner for inviting along on this wonderful piece.

You have such a romantic heart and it shows every time your pen touches paper.
I am blessed to be able to share in that beauty every time we collaborate.

I am so glad you entrusted me with the editing of this lovely poem and I love how you presented it.

Thank you for being my best friend and poetic partner.

HUGGS. ... Trace

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you sweet beast. It is always so much fun to write with you...we need to do it more often!read more

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart. I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's. I enjoy rec.. more..

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