Quiet Whispers

Quiet Whispers

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a collaboration with Trace ~

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Gently intertwined

vines tremble

as the wind quietly whispers

with the scent of roses

 

Beauty fills my heart

and words interlace

rising in a delicate mist

                         of the sweetest inspiration….

 

               

 

Gather me in your embrace

so you can see inside my soul

my reflection…

with mere words

 

A melody….

      your melody

etched upon my heart

lingering in a lullaby for two

 

The sweetest rhapsody

like a pairing of birds

winging to heaven

           as the world pauses...

 

  Lend me your lips

                 so I may taste your magic

mysterious and silky

          like showers of dewdrops

wet

as a falling tear

 

As soft as the beauty

that fills my heart

with quiet whispers

          and the scent of roses

 

…blooming only for you

 

 

© 2014 MsJewel


Author's Note

MsJewel
art by Lauri Blank

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As soft as velvet, your words wrapped round my heart. Julie, this is just so beautifully romantic!
" Lend me your lips

so I may taste your magic

mysterious and silky"

And yes, worthy of at least one heavy sigh! You write romance like no one else can. Lydi**

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you Lydi. I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one. Trace and I collaborated on it. He is always s.. read more
Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

OMG....sorry I did not realize it. I should have. When the two of you blend ink, it is always a pl.. read more



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I can't tell you how happy I am to see a collaboration from you guys.
You write the such wonderful romantic poetry. Beautiful. : )

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you Ana. Trace is a joy to write with.. :) Julie
I love to read your beautiful poems of love. You do it so well. I love it. Oh, to love in that way, brings back great memories. Your words flow so perfectly. Thank you Laura B.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment :) Julie
Confuser

9 Years Ago

Julie...you are so welcome. Wonderful writing....................
You write your poetry like a painter paints his canvas. All your work is so beautifully written :)
Great work by you two. And I would definitely say your pictures are so alluring.
Another great job!


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lizzie Mitchell

9 Years Ago

I agree with this comment! ^
MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words. Poetry is a bit like painting a blank canvas of beautiful images for.. read more
Intimacy of most tender kind is reflected in this poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
Beautiful love poem as always, Julie. It's romantic, sensual and full of love. Well done. :)
Rudi

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much Rudi. :) Julie
Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

9 Years Ago

My pleasure, Julie :)

Rudi
oh wow -that's a very nice collaboration - intimate, appealing, lasting - this is the sweetest inspiration - well done you two x x

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

You are very kind. Thanks so much :) Julie
A wonderful seamless piece. I like the flow and the romantic conclusion. Your expert presentation always impresses.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

I appreciate you lovely compliment. thanks so much :) Julie
You two paint poetry so beautifully together it is a testament on how you two work together so beautifully. Your works always flow together like a river with one heart and soul...you two are amazing writers even better when you two work together :)Larry

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

That is the sweetest compliment Larry. Thank you so much :) Julie
onceloved

9 Years Ago

:) You're welcome Julie...Larry
A soft melody fills my heart as I read this:

A melody….

your melody

etched upon my heart

lingering in a lullaby for two

It is beauty personified. A beautiful collaboration.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

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Added on November 18, 2014
Last Updated on November 19, 2014
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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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