Daddy's Shoes

Daddy's Shoes

A Poem by MsJewel
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Art ~ Steve Hanks

 

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When handsome knights wore daddy’s shoes
and princesses rode horses too
in fairytales we would play

The kingdoms that we would explore
not far beyond the back screen door
in lands so faraway

Where flowers danced and lightly swayed
and daisies winked as we would play
and Jack, he had that bean..

Where castles built upon a moat
were mysteries; how did they float?
perhaps it was the queen

The wicked queen with magic spells
in her dungeon a dragon dwells
he eats children for lunch!

Yet I was safe, as you can see
I had my knight to protect me
that dragon he would crunch

Then on my horse, off we would ride
my handsome knight right by my side
the sky in sunset hues

But tomorrow brought a new day
filled with magic from far away
when knights wore daddy’s shoes

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© 2015 MsJewel


Author's Note

MsJewel
Inspired by a conversation with my brother....such great memories....

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So very heart-warming! Could'nt we do everything back then the tiny tots, there was'nt anything impossible. Imagination made the lines marking the limits fade right away. This piece is a wonderful thing, it fills the heart with the old joy and exhilaration.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie



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Whimsical.... Very good rhyme scheme and great progression.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much Rico :) Julie
Memories are very precious and that all are the ultimate inspiration too. Beautiful poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
:) I love this side of your writing they are very sweet what beautiful perecous memories they are the kind of memories that are treaseires never forgoten they are always there in the comer of are hearts. :) Larry

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you Larry. I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one :) Julie
Chivalry has long existed, being passed down from generation to generation… must have been a fascinating conversation you had, your poem is magically brilliant.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you sweet cowboy :) Julie
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

9 Years Ago

My pleasure darling Julie :)
Wow, I want to go out and play now. Whenever I read your poems, I wish I'd written them.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Can Tom come out to play? :) Julie
wow totally enjoyed it ! Memories of time when our kid mind used to travel evry fairy tale with wondr and our sweet memories related with all of them beautifully styled in this poetry .. Loved it ! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
Beautiful memories. These ar things you must never forget, Julie, they are golden memories for sure. :) Rudi

Posted 9 Years Ago


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MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you Rudi :) Julie
This is really good... I love this and if it was conversation with your brother, it must of been really good.
I really love the poem the feeling of emotion in it.
Great work

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

I wrote it after a conversation with my brother about how things have changed. We left the house af.. read more
dear Julie... My granddaughter Madeline has walked in
all my shoes and her Moms and Dads and brothers too.
Now that she is seven, she has taken tap and ballet, and
now plays T-ball and basketball too. It all starts with wearing
Daddy's shoes. The world is her oyster and pearls are her goal.
Love your poetry... so magical and true blue. truly ... Pat

Posted 9 Years Ago


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MsJewel

9 Years Ago

There is something about Daddy's shoes - and mom's too. I think I wore my mother's high heels more .. read more
Patricia Wedel

9 Years Ago

dear Julie... Shoes are like poems ... they
take us on a journey of dreams and adventures read more
Patricia Wedel

9 Years Ago

dear Julie... I hugged Madeline for you...
Thanks for being you. with love.... Pat

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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