Aglow

Aglow

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a little love scribble ~

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art ~ Svetlana Valueva

 

 

 

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Outside a chill is falling

pale in the winter snow

from where I am my darling

springtime is aglow

the vines are intertwining

with buds ready to bloom

while my heartbeat is climbling

left breathless in this room

to wait for your voice calling

with the passion I know

will have my petals falling 

‘til springtime is aglow

~~~

© 2015 MsJewel


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Your artwork supports this poem with a scene of love and joy.

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Stunning ......................

Posted 5 Years Ago


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MsJewel

5 Years Ago

Thank you sweet lady :) Julie
Lovely write julie :) I really enjoy the tenderness and intensity of passion that you play with together in each write. its amazing. cheers!

Posted 5 Years Ago


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MsJewel

5 Years Ago

Thank you my sweet friend Cheers! :) Julie
Springtime is glowing like crazy in this poem. Great work Jewel

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MsJewel

5 Years Ago

Thank you BR! :) Julie
Gorgeous and spellbound. A real piece of magic :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


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MsJewel

5 Years Ago

You are very sweet. Thank you Ana :) Julie
the vines are intertwining
with buds ready to bloom
while my heartbeat is climbling
left breathless in this room

to wait for your voice calling
with the passion I know

These were the nicest lines 💗
Very nice title too,btw!:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


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MsJewel

5 Years Ago

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie
Very beautiful and enchanting words. An apt ode to the magical turn of the weather.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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MsJewel

5 Years Ago

Thank you Avinash :) Julie
to wait for your voice calling
with the passion I know
will have my petals falling
‘til springtime is aglow.

I am fascinated.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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MsJewel

5 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
hmmm you say "scribble" , I say beautiful art... Julie, Julie, Julie, your scribbles are like "petals falling" and "springtime all aglow"... I think I like your springtime much better than the real thing... ;0)

~~redzone

Posted 5 Years Ago


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MsJewel

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words my sweet friend. :) Julie
I believe Julie that my library may be full of your work including this one, such a beautiful piece of poetry, the rhyme and flow is sublime, your heart is a poem i think, beautiful Julie :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


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MsJewel

5 Years Ago

You are too kind Richard. :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart. I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's. I enjoy rec.. more..

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