Had The Sun Not Set

Had The Sun Not Set

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ would have, could have...should have? ~

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Yes, we would have kissed

if he had been mine…

 

In Augusts’ warm mist

when ripe on the vine

were strawberries sweet

and luscious to lips

just longing to meet

in soft little sips

 

The sun was a fire

through clouds of whip cream

‘til fervent desire

in a sky of dreams

faded into the mist

of twilights soft threat

 

Yes, we would have kissed

had the sun not set

© 2015 MsJewel


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The kiss that never happened, but was oh so wanted,
and more than likely by both.....

One never knows when the opportunity may arise again,
don't let it pass by without exploring the possibilities.

The softest expression
of love is felt
when wanting lips
together melt.

XOXO ;}
Trace

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

5 Years Ago

Lay with me dear
upon the grass
lend me your lips
and I'll pinch your a*s...read more
Trace

5 Years Ago

Only if you are wearing your red heals and black dress



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It’s a thin line between being hesitant and experiencing immense joy, often or not missing out , you just want to kick yourself for not

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

So true Andrew - so true :) Julie
A kiss very much saves the day. thanks for sharing this nice poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Fantastic and unique rhymes!! I love this :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Luscious with longing. You have a definite rhyming scheme, and yet it takes a back seat to your chosen words and phrases. But shouldn't it be "whipped" instead of "whip"? Trust me to focus in on that one!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Those kisses not attempted. Leave us wishing for long days and embrace.
"Yes, we would have kissed
had the sun not set"
The mystery of things not finished leave us yearning for a second chance. Thank you dear Julie for your amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


Awesome work! Such a delicate moment you have captured here

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
This piece is so lighthearted to read but yet so potent in what emotion it carries ! great work

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

5 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thanks so much :) Julie
So many unrealized dreams reflect from your words in quite beautiful way.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

5 Years Ago

Thank you Avinash :) Julie
But there be a kiss, the sun is warmth as breath and wind is as fast as our desire.
This is so beautiful.

The sun was a fire
through clouds of whip cream

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) julie
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Ah,if only.A most agreeable read my dear,spiffing.(that's my luvvie review)Enjoyed the poem,great flow and rhyming

Posted 5 Years Ago



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MsJewel
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