This Night

This Night

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a sensual little scribble ~

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                This night…

 

Let there only be moonlight

and your breath upon my skin

painting my cheeks a fevered blush

my lips softening the crush of yours

 

Eyes veiled with wishes,

souls wrapped in beams of light

exposing every secret

whispered sweet….passionate sips

between love’s kiss

 

For nothing is hidden…nor forbidden

not the power of my fragility

as weakened in your strength

pressing us closer together

 

I catch my breath…you breathe me in

               

Hearts beating wild,

 like the dance of a windblown flame

 captured

                                                      this night

       

                                                we breathe us

 

© 2015 MsJewel


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I knew I was going to love this from reading the first two lines. So sensual and passionate, but not aggressive or uncouth. I love that you can convey such a sexy scene while still keeping it classy. Perfect poem for someone's bae on Valentine's Day! Amazing job

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words Elisa :) Julie



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phew!!!!! stupendous! just a little scribble, huh. impossible to single out a line here.
simply amazing. another jewel MsJewel.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words Woody. Yes, they are scribbles and heartprints...
:) Julie
Is love on words. The poem is a beauty paint of two lovers who could be burned on fire since first touch.
Exciting beauty, magical.
You paint the love with the elegant touch of masters.
Thanks for share your magic.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

I apologize it has taken me so long to respond. Thank you for your kind and generous words. I appre.. read more
I knew I was going to love this from reading the first two lines. So sensual and passionate, but not aggressive or uncouth. I love that you can convey such a sexy scene while still keeping it classy. Perfect poem for someone's bae on Valentine's Day! Amazing job

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words Elisa :) Julie
Sweet adorable and passionate, beautifully written

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

thank you for your kind words :) Julie
This is very beautiful poetry Julie, it is the windows of ones soul, it speak volumes of ones true thoughts and feelings for another I could feel the beautiful longing in this one for the Beast. :) Larry

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you Larry :) Julie
This speaks to the soul tugging at the heart while yelling at the mind to get on board. Rich and robust imagery with a perfect ending.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you Rico :) Julie
Very romantic description of one lovers submission of their frailty.Very nicely written.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

thank you my sweet friend :) julie
W R Stowe

9 Years Ago

Your very welcome
Beautifully articulated poem!☺

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much. :) Julie
You just take away our breath !
Even my heart started beating with this write with some memories
Gorgeous !!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

You are very sweet. Thank you :) julie
This poem is beautiful, seductive and enchanting beyond all measure. Quite the read, and very well scribbled.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely review :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

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