Dangerous ~ a MsJewel and Trace collaboration

~ having a little fun with my best friend Trace ~

 

 

 

Dangerous

Part 1 ~ The Lady

 

I let him drive my car…

 

Top down, 4^th gear

hair, teased by the wind

as he takes the curves on Pacific Coast Highway

a little faster than is comfortable

smiling…that smile

 

Weak knees, blushing cheeks…

I try my best to concentrate on the moonlight

peeking through the clouds,

shimmering off the tide

                   in a sea of liquid light

the long stretch of deserted sand

beckoning moonlit paradise

              for lovers

strolling hand in hand

 

My head screams slow down

but the words are lost

in the beat of my heart,

                  racing

the butterflies in my stomach,

                              fluttering

my hand trembling as I reached for his

 

Without a word, he stops the car

taking my hand, kissing it gently

smiling…that smile

                             yes,

                                      it was then I knew

…..he’s dangerous

         

 

 

Dangerous,

Part 2 ~ The Gentleman

 

                 I want to go for a ride…

 

Will you drive?

 

I held her door, as she slid into the soft leather seat

handing me her keys

 

But was it the cut of her dress

or the demure pause

that made me hesitate

Oh, yes….

the exposed thigh for my admiration

 

So.... "she’ll let me drive "

I thought, as I started the car

“I’ve got this.”

 

Sure,  she knows how to drive this little German

and she looks “so fine”, her long blonde hair,

this shiny black convertible

 

But does she know what this little thing can do?

Does she know that I do know how to drive it,

to its limits?

 

The P.C.H. rolls out before us

as the moonlight beckons lovers to the beach

I see her exhilaration and anxiety

with every turn and every run through the gears

faster

and harder

I take control,

and enjoy the view

 

Excitement radiates from her fingers

as she pushes her nails into my hand

I slow this marvelous machine

to see the fire in her eyes

her breasts rising with every breath

 

The smile and nervous laugh makes me wonder

was it the driving….or the driver?

as I kiss her hand

I think to myself

…she’s dangerous

 

But….

I’ve got this

  

Author's Note

Art ~ by Rob Hefferan "Romance Series"
Poetry ~ by MsJewel and Trace

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh my, i am reminded of those nights on Briggs Street, the old dirt road when we used to park and make out---
How far was the destination, how far were we allowed to drive?
and how far would she stay riding shotgun ---in the backseat of teen passion.

[MsJewel]

I'm glad this one brought back good memories Jacob. Thank you :) Julie

[wordman]

reminded me of a 1953 chevy convertible my cousin used to own
we went out on several dates driving it..a great job as usual,loved the write
and the adventure

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much Ron :) Julie

[wordman]

you are welcome

[Einstein Noodle]

the first pic popped right out at me and i had expectations that were not unmet .. there is a time element to those pics that bleeds romance and dashing, dangerous men ...not to mention the intractable, "demure" blonde ..such a hot couple and where else to drive but the PCH!! ... your collab brought memories of some rides i had on my HD (a forever enthusiast) in Spearfish Canyon and Needles Highway .. the faster one dares those curves the tighter her legs cinched my hips .. i thought she was really getting into it but later she gave me hell and said i am not to drive so fast around curves .. to slow down so the bike stays upright ... we said goodbye that day ;)
love your collabs .. always playful and fulfilling!
E.

[MsJewel]

Why is it that men love to drive fast...after writing this collab, I will never let Trace drive my car.
I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one. We had fun writing it. :) Julie

[Einstein Noodle]

its our little boy adventure complex ... and just what kind of car won't you let Trace drive?? I don't think that's fair ;)

[Trace]

This was a fun one to write with you.
Using the wonderful art as inspiration to tell the story
And playing off your words made it easy to follow your lead.

Thank you for inviting me along on this sexy little ride my Lady.

Huggs... Trace.

[MsJewel]

Remind me never to give you my keys...even though I did enjoy this ride.
Hugs to you sweet beast :) Julie

[Trace]

Come on baby... let me drive your car.....

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Really beautiful and good description of the feelings from both sides, the woman and the man. Something else than I'm used to read, but very well done indeed. :) Rudi

[MsJewel]

Thank you Rudi :) Julie

[Ana B.]

Oh my, this was breathtaking :) You guys did a wonderful job! Julie, you're fantastic and Trace - mesmerizing :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you lovely lady! :) Julie

[R Smith]

Great!! a wonderful collab and it has that dark film noir movie, effect the old days of black and white film, driving along ocean highways, the wind, the moonlight and yes your right, you both got this, perfectly :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[armin]

what a great artistic work Julie and no doubt you are an amazing artist. I loved the given stanza,
strolling hand in hand
My head screams slow down
but the words are lost
in the beat of my heart,
racingthe butterflies in my stomach,flutteringmy hand trembling
as I reached for his

An excellent collaboration to an enjoyable reading pleasure.
Keep the good work coming.

Your friend Spidey.. .

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment. I'm sure Trace will appreciate it as well. :) Julie

[armin]

Pleasure :)..