Warmed

~ a little scribble on a sunny spring afternoon ~

 

 

 

Spring floats in…

 

                 as graceful

as the marshmallow cream clouds

dotting a blue sky

 

twirling slowly

on the kiss of a breeze

warmed

with the scent of flowers

tiny buds decorating the morning glories

calling quietly

to a bumble bee

buzzing about

 

I breathe in deep

the fragrance of spring

 

reminiscing

of long walks and lazy picnics

under this same sky

and waking to the scent of morning glories

calling quietly

on the kiss of a breeze

…warmed

 

 

Reviews

[R Smith]

hi Julie, wish i lived where you do its still chilly here which is really strange, usually sweating buckets by April lol, another intensely beautiful poem from your very fine mind, you make the scene's so real i could walk right into them

'I breathe in deep
the fragrance of spring'

Magnificent !!

[MsJewel]

I'll send you some California sunshine my sweet friend. :) Julie

[Tiana]

such lovely visions penned so beautifully, Julie ... I really enjoyed it ...

[MomzillaNC]

Beautiful and intensely rich imagery.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Julie there is an overwhelming desire to kick the legs up, live in the poem and wander away far into the sky.

Thank you!

regards,

al

[MsJewel]

Thank you Al! :) Julie

[Jimmy Yetts]

Lovely, fresh and sweet--just like Spring.
Reflective of a poetess, no doubt, who also possesses those same Spring-like qualities.
An eloquent, skillfully crafted piece, J; gratifying to read.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I appreciate it very much! :) Julie

[Isabel25]

Marshmallow cream clouds!!!! That is my favourite line in this. There is no better way to describe those white clouds than this.

One small doubt..shouldn't the first letters of 'Morning Glory' be in caps since it is a name?

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment Annie - yes I think it should be in caps..thanks so much! :) Julie

[Isabel25]

Always a pleasure 'Ms.Jewel of a poet' :)

[Perkele.7885]

a pretty little ditty you have graced us with. I can smell the flowers or is that the 'final touch'?

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Avinash]

Your aphrodisiac writing scales new heights with every new installment. We really need romantic writers like you to keep the flame burning.

[MsJewel]

You are very sweet. Thank you :) Julie

[613]

This was so beautiful. Well done.

- Brittney

[MsJewel]

Thank you Brittney :) Julie

[613]

You're welcome!

[Rossen]

Such wonderful words dance from the tips of you...

[MsJewel]

A very sweet comment. Thank you :) Julie