Glistening

Glistening

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a romantic little scribble ~

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                    art ~ garmash

 

 

His scent lingers on my skin

as soft as a veil morning dew

                                                     Glistening

           

When sunbeams are a whisper

and the day breathes roses

                   awakening the butterflies

                                        confetti wings fluttering

to the gentle joy of leftover dreams

 

As my mind wanders

back to the moonlit garden he so lovingly tended

 

When his eyes were as bright as sunlight on a stream

and his lips were a kiss of poetry on the breeze

                stealing my breath

                                       catching my skirt

weaving the night in satin stars

 

And I awaken too

surrounded with the essence

of roses and butterflies

                                     and his scent

 

as soft as morning dew

                               Glistening

 

                        

© 2015 MsJewel


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There is something about the painting, Julie, about the font, the color, the layout of your lines, the emotional lure and beauty that sweeps my senses up into your romantically enthralling moment, that I simply and sincerely love the enthralling sensations of.

Julie, my sensitive side seems drawn rather completely and deeply by every line and verse, but most of all to this:
"When his eyes were as bright as sunlight on a stream
and his lips were a kiss of poetry on the breeze
stealing my breath
catching my skirt
weaving the night in satin stars"

Goodness-ME!
Well, I'll close now, Julie, and thank you every-so warmly … on my way to another read.
Big hugs to you for sharing your excellent pen! ⁓ Richard

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words Richard :) Julie
Richard🖌

8 Years Ago

Kind words?
Well, you're welcome, Julie.



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You capture so much vision in your poetry, always tenderly poised and a sheer delight to read :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Years Ago

Thank you Poppy :) Julie
This is soft and sensual
And carries on that morning breeze
In such romantic beauty.

Always enjoy reading your lovely poetry.

HUGGS. . Trace

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Years Ago

Thank you sweet beast. Hugs, Julie
sounds like a beautiful love affair julie

Posted 8 Years Ago


In your style. Romantic and softly woven in an enticing and well recounted verse of colour and vibrancy and touch and bouquet.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
ohhhh the Glistening ;) your at it again Ms Jewel! weaving tapestries of steamy subtle enticements and the wonderment of love's satisfactions ... especially like these:
"awakening the butterflies
confetti wings fluttering"
and:
"stealing my breath
catching my skirt"

and you prolong the afterglow well into a very soft morning hello :)
E.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie
Einstein Noodle

8 Years Ago

:) .......... thank you for your poetry dear one!
The garden he so lovingly tended. This line struck my heart, and memories poured in. Thank you. Valentine

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Years Ago

Thank you Kathie :) Julie
A heartracing, breathtaking piece of romantic writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thanks so much :) Julie
This is a beautiful sensuous piece that deserves the highest praise. Thank you.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
You chose your words so carefully and crafted them into beautiful poetry they always echo the depth of your emotion so beautifully they can be very touching and very moving too.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Years Ago

Thank you Larry :) Julie
It was really an eye catching read & as soft as morning dew. Good work Julie!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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