~ If ~

~ If ~

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ just a little scribble ~

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art by Lauri Blank



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If dreams come true, my precious one

lonely nights would never be

For I would let my hair flow

in an ocean of beauty

I’d catch you with each golden strand

and hold you close to me

We’d sail away upon sweet dreams

in colors of the sea...

Reflections of an endless love

for all eternity

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© 2016 MsJewel


Author's Note

MsJewel
art by Lauri Blank
poetry by MsJewel

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The passion you convey in your poetry makes me smile, for j write the same way, I am a very passionate writer. What a beautiful poem ma'am, melted my heart with every line, by the time I was finished it was reduced to a puddle of passion 😉..Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece

Poeticme

Posted 7 Years Ago


Your poems are always passionate and blissful. This poem was not as intense as others I have read of yours. None the less it is well written and speaks to lovers. Your work is always polished.
Richie b.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you Richie :) Julie
I will pray that your Dreams will come true

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

You are very kind. Thank you.
Abraham George

7 Years Ago

its ok. If you have time please go through my works too.
Beautifully written! :) love the picture as well.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
"If dreams come true, my precious one
lonely nights would never be
For I would let my hair flow
in an ocean of beauty"

This is beautifully written. A soft piece with quite an imagery but a longing too..
Nicely penned 😊

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much :) Julie
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

You're welcome 😊
Not so little a scribble. A whole lot said in just a few words. Nice write. Valentine

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Julie, what a soft and vivid piece of artistry :) Beautiful!

Posted 7 Years Ago


I really enjoyed this. The imagery was surreal, yet strangely comforting and the language itself was lilting, beautiful, and befitting of the topic. My only issue might be the title, since it is already the title of a very famous poem. I half expected it to be related in some way to Kipling's "If" when I saw it. Other than that, this is lovely. Keep up the good work, and please review one of mine if you get the chance.

Posted 7 Years Ago


love is an all eternity kind of stuff always should be. Love is forevermore.

Posted 7 Years Ago


A truly poetic piece
dreams are the true window of the soul

and what a wonderful place for a lover to reside ......

Posted 7 Years Ago



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