Cold and Deep

Cold and Deep

A Poem by MsJewel

 

 

                                    Pale in winter white are clouds that weep

a snowflake's tender fall,

‘tis cold and deep

 

                                    The frost of winter chill can't hold me dear

                                    a tingle finds my cheek, one frozen tear

                                    to dress my winter coat in quiet chill

                                    gathered 'pon stormy winds, yet all is still

 

Taking the blue of skies, this frost that clings

in silence icy cries lost on the wings

of graceful nightingales and as they fly

sweet songs of joy are lost in the dark sky

 

Unzip the silent night for in my dreams

wrapped in the silver sheet of warm moonbeams

I find myself in spring, I feel the bliss

of butterflies, sweet perfume on my wrist

           

Caressed in warm embrace and flowery hue

with honey kisses sweet, romance is new

and soft as whispered words only love hears

fading slowly away as the dawn nears

               

Pale in winter white where my dreams sleep

and still the snowflakes fall,

 ‘tis cold and deep

© 2018 MsJewel


Author's Note

MsJewel
Art ~ Lauri Blank
Poetry ~ MsJewel

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I liked how you used the seasons.
"Caressed in warm embrace and flowery hue
with honey kisses sweet, romance is new
and soft as whispered words only love hears
fading slowly away as the dawn nears"
The above lines, tempting and beautiful. Thank you dear friend for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome dear Julie.



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Such beautiful flow and tones with this one invoking mixed emotions along the way. The use of seasonal change fits so well and is perfect!

Posted 9 Months Ago


dear Julie... Winter is past, but not forgotten. Now, we need to think
of Summer and the sun-kissed mirth of sand and shore where seagulls
write poetry in clouds of discontent... a time of literature turned
upside down by leaders of countries so profound. There is a Season
for all things... with hope and love for everyone. truly, Pat x

Posted 9 Months Ago


A sonnet with elegance and pathos and well described scenes as it flows in beautiful waves of sadness.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Beautiful words. Lovely lyrical tones. NICE.

Posted 1 Year Ago


This was ethereal!! Want to read more.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
it was snow today among the grass awaiting green but unlike your snow flake of cold and deep ours was a joyful leap.

regards,
al

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

I'm thrilled it was joyful. Stay warm! :) Julie
Alfred Kukitz

1 Year Ago

great image
I really like how you started and ended this poem. Definitely my favourite xx

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thanks so much :) Julie
I liked how you used the seasons.
"Caressed in warm embrace and flowery hue
with honey kisses sweet, romance is new
and soft as whispered words only love hears
fading slowly away as the dawn nears"
The above lines, tempting and beautiful. Thank you dear friend for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome dear Julie.
those snowflakes, so beautiful, yet cold and deep.....like love...it is sometimes a shelter, and sometimes a storm within the shelter.
j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob :) Julie
Love the last several lines
Absolute beauty xx

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

2 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie

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MsJewel

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