Not Even the Moon

Not Even the Moon

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a love poem ~

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Before he kissed me…

 

not even the moon

pale as it was

could cool

the warm wind rising

in a soft velvet sky

and the trees

branches stirring

the shimmer of leaves

waiting

for the night to shed her dew

 

His eyes held a starlit dream

His heart my only wish

 

And now…

as I loosen my hair

catching him in silk threads

                tangled

 

I think…

                not even the moon

© 2018 MsJewel


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Julie, each work is art. You have a gift for pairing the perfect image with your poetry. It's so gentle and tender, but even more passionate. I can see this scene, especially with the lovely lady, light penetrating dark and silk. And, "not even the moon" can cool the passion... even before the kiss. Beyond impressive!

Posted 1 Year Ago


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MsJewel

1 Year Ago

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie



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such a very romantic here, this is so very well written, I love this piece....

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

6 Months Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thank you
Romance is held together by moonlight
the breath of the unfilled desires
and the song spilling from this poets lips...

You have all the skills to write any form...
Yet you continue to grace us with romanctic poetry
the something a miss kinda feeling
that reminds us we are alive and that love must reach.... thank you for moving my heart through the years ...
Beautiful~
100/100




Posted 1 Year Ago


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MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie
This is beyond enchanting, "the warm wind rising /in a soft velvet sky," beautiful imagery!

Posted 1 Year Ago


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MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)

1 Year Ago

It was a pleasure.
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"His eyes held a starlit dream"-- that is the prettiest line that I heard today!


Posted 1 Year Ago


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MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you! :) Julie
So beautifully written...

Posted 1 Year Ago


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MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you Divya :) Julie
Another Gem to warm the cockles of every man's heart and desire and the picture compliments the sensuality and softness. As the band Fleetwood said in song" you make loving fun!"

Posted 1 Year Ago


Your writing is simply velvet and silk.

If I wasn't a monster I'd like to think I'd write like you.



Posted 1 Year Ago


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MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kind words:) Julie
Hi, Julie! : )
Your picture is a warmly creative poem in itself, blending into your softly tender words the nuances of moment, skillfully with effulgent caresses of imagery in thought, heart, and emotional timbre only the most gently sensitive amongst us is likely to fully grasp in essence … still, as in all of your fine efforts, there is something for every discerningly imaginative dreamer's heart.
Whom could resist the sensually metaphoric charm of moon, dreams, and a lover's heart … not me, obviously. ; )

I know mine's thrumming nicely … thank you, Julie, for another lovely moment shared! ⁓ Richard

Posted 1 Year Ago


MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your always lovely comments :) Julie
Jewel, you make me want to love you more!

regards,
al

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie
:) To love and be loved it is the most beautiful feelings one can know, you have show how beautiful it is again so beautifully Julie, :) Larry

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you Larry :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart. I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's. I enjoy rec.. more..

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