Let it Snow

Let it Snow

A Poem by MsJewel


art compliments of pinterest




~~~

As stars that shine on winter nights

are to the moon's beauty

when snowflakes whisper in the wind

so was his love to me

 

And still he shines deep in my heart

and whispers in the glow

of winter nights and pale moons

 

Please love…let it snow  

~~~

© 2018 MsJewel


Author's Note

MsJewel
art - compliments of Pinterest
poetry - MsJewel

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Soft and tender poetry Julie. Your words always dance on the page and create mystical poetry. Hope you and your family had a Blessed Christmas!
Peace,
Richie b.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you for stopping by and leaving a lovely comment Richie :) Julie



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Hi Msjewel this one I adore the most it's perfect in every way I'll just read it once again😋

Posted 1 Month Ago


I'd say this poetry is actually poetic. Making its way into the hearts of its readers softly and quietly. it is a joy to read your writing again. :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


Ah, this is just ever so lovely... quite the enjoyable read

Posted 6 Months Ago


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Rye
So very soft, I really enjoyed this write. Beautiful

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Months Ago

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie
Very nicely done
In the less romantic world of snow, I would like to see a dump or two myself for the sake of our well in the summer.
Stay warm
Dave B

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you John :) Julie
Such a gentle, loving poem, edged in lace and sweet desire. Beautiful, Julie, truly beautiful in every way.. the colour injected into the whole is cleverly alluring.


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thank you Emma :) Julie
Sighing... such a soft trembling echo of words and longings. Everything here seems so deeply personal, so transparent. Beautifully confessed.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your generous review :) Julie
Julie Dear,
First-off, your presentation is sheer eye candy … the picture setting a nuance the ambiance of your words answer tenderly ⁓ with warming love, as only You know how.
You know me, a fan of excellently rendered poetic form, rhythm, and emotional metaphor; the Quatrain in bd, fh rhymes amongst my favorites.
I love the way you've used the ellipsis in your final line to emphasize the ending's impact, and the tilde's above and below the body, along with the light blue font choice, to soften the entire feel.

Bless you for sharing your always splendid art, straight from your poetess' ever-so beautiful heart! ⁓ Richard : )

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kind words Richard. :) Julie
Richard 🍃

1 Year Ago

You know I'm always thrilled by your poetry, Julie. : D
A charming and romantic piece. Impeccably presented, as always. Nice to see you

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you Lyn :) Julie
Lyn Anderson

1 Year Ago

You are a nice little breath of fresh air whatever the season
This is a short and sweet poem that speaks volumes on love celebrated.

WELL DONE

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

thank you :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

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